What can result from a night so everything title of the story: Only one night and
After that night Author: noda Fandom: Bleach The plot: Zombie! Hisana returns to
Emo! Byakuya back - for one night. Then comes a miracle! Pregnancy, forced marriage, death and everything else again, what has been done to GZSZ ratings hit.
+ nearly flawless in grammar and spelling
+ present is consistently maintained
- Punctuation consists of points. And points. And points.
- tiring Staccato style with short declarative sentences
- repeated words
- author comments.
Senseless author comments.
- Byakuya is OOC
Only one night
A mysterious, black clad figure sneaks on a property where all the sleeping. The aim of the legume! Burglar knows nothing of the text aloud lie ahead of him evil that brings a three years ago suffering.
The room is simply furnished. A wardrobe, a mirror and a bed (1) . A double (2) . This room brings back memories. Beautiful but poor. Slowly she walks to the bed (3) .
The mysterious burglar indulges in memories of the sleeping Byakuya compared to their present, sex-obsessed husband.
She closes her eyes (care of: 1) to exploit this moment fully. Byakuya the awake through this light and gentle touch with looks foggy mind from sleep in the face before him. The clouds drift past the moon and its light falls through the window in the room. "Hisana" he brings out her eyes before she (2) opens and looks into his. Hisana is in its deep blue-gray eyes (3) totally lost. He is not better. Her violet eyes (4) did not let go.
Hisana may separate the first from the spell of his eyes (5) .
Hum, Byakuya Kuchiki's also an experienced fighter or so, the fact should be noted if someone breaks into his room at night, or act in the event of such a situation immediately and not first slept through history would look into the world. But this superiority of touching eyes, because you can even get a model-Shinigami times out of step.
Hisanas view brings in any case the ice to Emo! To melt Byakuya's heart. The will, however, did not even consider the possibility of a beautiful dream into account and is silent and stares.
But it feels and sounds so real. Her laughter, feeling her forehead on his and the warmth and security that only they can give him. With a trembling voice (he shakily ° -? ° which I have since thought) speaks his thoughts and needs.
Wuaah, an author comment! And yes, it fits not to Byakuya. Really.
"Hisana. I know that it is only a dream. Let me wake up, please. Every time I see you lying in my dreams you die in and I do not see you die over and over. "She's touched by his words. Are formed in Hisana's little corner of his eye tears. "I love you more than anything. You are my light, that I even through the darkest phase my life has accompanied. So I may not stand there watching you suffer. "Now the tears and even Byakuya Hisana with such sweet words from her lover not the other edge.
Byakuya ... crying? * Headdesk
* Just a reminder, the revered Lord Kuchiki is characterized by a specific character trait, he reacts emotionally extremely cool. Both at that time to his wife and later in the execution of his sister. He is not necessarily a man of many words.
Byakuya is shocked. He sits motionless in bed, staring at the woman who has just sat on his lap. [K] Is this really a dream? It must be one. Hisana is dead and yet it feels so real. Can it be that it is not a dream after all? [/ k
(...)
"It's not a dream Byakuya-sama. I'm here. "These are her last words before their lips meet. Slowly, he closes his eyes. A shiver runs down his back. These warm and soft lips. Of which he now may cost after 3 years.
Exactly, fuck it, that the woman for three years dead, and therefore can not be there ! Accordingly, it must be either an illusion (keyword Kyouka Suigetsu) or act Hollow (keyword Aaroniero), in each case, something that probably is quite dangerous . And therefore it would be best off just snogs Sun
Then us an important lesson to be taught:
But everyone needs time to breathe air. Therefore have to separate the two.
We know already from various Badfics: You can not kiss and breathe simultaneously. Noses are simply totally overrated!
Byakuya For a dream come true. He has his beloved Hisana again. But something is bothering him.
Uhm ... that they actually quite is already dead for three years, perhaps?
In their eyes he can see sadness, despair and pain. Many things going through his head.
That she has been dead for three years, you see them die and bury you, it looks like your new little sister and you are guaranteed with this kiss all laws Seireiteis 've broken? Just as a non-binding examples?
But before he can say something opened Hisana him the worst thing he's ever heard. "I can only stay here for the night. My time in this world has expired (Jah, for you are stone dead for three years!) . I was sent (by forwarding) in a different world. There I was sold by people to a rich businessman. He is holding me captive in his house. Just by luck I was able to escape. Tomorrow morning before dawn I must be back. Otherwise, he brings my friends . Which I have found there to "
* headdesk *
Again for the record: apparently there's a world of the spirits of deceased spirits. And "by chance" Hisana can simply go back? And I thought it would be in the Bleach universe, a fixed rule that dead spirits disappear forever. Moreover, it is of course an A from Hisana that they would rather see her beloved husband, who risked everything to her, she cared for five years and adopted her sister sitting on leaves than their friends in this ominous different world.
Hisana gets any case, a Heulanfall and Byakuya has the obligatory to-the-comfort-website:
"Hisana. I'll see you on the is something on your mind. "Hisana turns his head to the side in order not to have to see him in the eye. You can not bear to watch the pain in his eyes. "Look at me. I want to help you. Tell me please how I can help you. (And if you're at it. Tell me please where can I get a comma. For my rates.) "You do not know why their eyes look again his, but then they know it. It is her love for him and the guilt it after only 5 years of marriage has left alone.
Yay, Hisana has searchlight! Eyes! And what do you mean, they know not, why? I thought they would be extra back from this other world because she loves him! The you should actually have been previously clear. Unless it was primarily about the Kuchiki'sche to steal furniture and here is accidentally stumbled upon Byakuya ...
It is at any rate to the point, even if Byakuya fear in Hisanas supposedly eyes to see (with an obviously sexually violent husband no surprise), but they just want to enjoy the night, and sex is anyway Badfics panacea, see for yourself:
The next morning begins like any Byakuya. He wakes up alone, and puts on breakfast. But on this morning is all the other art. Byakuya is fortunate to have Hisana seen again. Last night was the best he ever had. He has slept with her. She has thereby given power to the rest of life, what else is in front of.
In any event Byakuya happy because he now knows that Hisana exists in another world forever separated from him further and there is obviously absolutely miserable and suffers him to think & ndash , yay, if not even the is encouraging! Hisana also left a letter in which she describes the last night as beautiful. Byakuya you vote for in silence and goes happily on its way - yay.
This ends the number one One Shot, however, came with "After that night - a surprise for Byakuya "a sequel that I would deny no one here, so let's go in round two!
dreams come true
The entire property is in the utmost haste. (All walls, doors and roof tiles run around busily, while the shrubs and trees in the garden and to tire out.) It is scheduled for a wedding. But the groom knows nothing of his happiness. It is at this time traveling alone. For several days he tormented nightmares Guilt. Just a few days ago he was the happiest man in the world, if only for one night. The ice which has included his heart was melted. Byakuya owes it to his late wife. He hopes every night that she would come back to him or he would at least send a message. But nothing happens. More and more he accuses himself back in his dream world, where he and Hisana live happily together.
Well, obviously an effect in the temporary panacea. And Byakuya is a Canon so totally dreamy and imaginative man. Hum. He also has three years after her death got over somehow, the current tragedy reveals itself to me not quite. (Quite apart from the slightly necrophiliac General statement.)
in the large meeting room sit the elders of the Kuchiki Clan's. They have exploited the absence of her mental head to Byakuya to marry an aristocrat. But not all elders are enthusiastic about this idea. This lady liked a few Hisana. She brought a change in the rigid behavior that you had to show as noble. But they also knew that they need an heir. For a Shinigami and especially a Captain shall not very long. The 27th clan chief namely Byakuya's father was killed along with his wife on a mission. Thus Byakuya's grandfather has resumed the position.
Although Byakuya is the future clan leader, and as such should have a certain authority in such matters, he should die would pass over the tracks just to the side line or his sister , so no reason to marry him against his will. Ginrei does not necessarily someone who has his marry against their will would only grandson. Byakuya also has twice violated all rules of the Kuchiki family and have never felt any reprisals, the elders can it therefore be relatively unimportant.
Byakuya bride comes from the (fictional) Minarashi noble family, and we described in detail. That is, so half:
Her long black hair was pinned up artistically. It is considered by many embellishments in the form. (Can not describe very well)
Japanese, now I can imagine it to me visually, thanks author to comment!
Byakuya gets to anything, what the elders are planning for his future. The only thought is that exists in his mind, "Is it good or Hisana she needs my help?". But as much as he is concerned about it. He can think of no answer. To the question whether he will see him again Hisana ever think of no answer. But one thing he knows. Hisana loves him and is there where she is doing everything possible to return to be with him. He hopes, anyway.
"know exactly" and "hope" are two different things ground up, my friend. Moreover, it is great that he ever asks if she needs his help. Because he could help her, in a world of which he does not even know how to get there.
said in the new world Hisanas husband has locked her in the cellar and put on complete food deprivation, from which she concludes razor sharp that he wants to die let them. One of her friends, Yuan emerged suddenly in the cellar, and asks how it goes like this.
"As far as doing quite well. But I do not want to wait long. "Her eyes fall on her stomach. This grows a new life. Condemned to a life of obscurity, like that of her mother. "Here, I've brought some bread and water. You need power. So you can raise your child. "" No, my body is weak. When the baby comes I will probably not survive it. But I do not want her to suffer same fate as me. Can I ask you a favor? "
Hisana is arguably a living ultrasound, at least they know they will get a daughter - yay! Apart from that, their line of reasoning is bad plausible. "I'm pregnant and exhausted,"
- "Then eat but what" - "No, my body is weak!" - "Uhm ... so yes you should eat!" - "I have to die a tragic death at the birth of thinking, but look!"
Yuan Hisana must promise that child to his to bring father.
Yuan is shocked. How will she get there and find him. She has never seen him before. But she wants to help her friend and agrees.
Just follow the trail of the missing question mark! And non-existent dimension Goals! And plot holes!
Byakuya will be opened by the elders that he should marry again in order of conception of an heir. Then it gets a little confusing with an accumulation of literal speech: narrow
Byakuya eyes to dangerous slits. "You all know very well that Hisana the only woman I will marry ever. "" Yes, we know that Lord Byakuya. But you need an heir. I, too ...." "Silence finally Byakuya-sama is going to marry this woman full stop!" "Watch your words. Since your not the leader but I do. You have to tell me anything. The elders are only consultants. The clan leader makes the decision, Ye shall not only give advice and make decisions for me. "Slowly Byakuya hand moves the handle of Senbonsakura. But does not decide on such a lower level condescend.
Yeah. Exactly. Byakuya is considering to kill his own family. Totally IC. * Headdesk *
Byakuya is through the whole nightmare all over from the roll, and breaks down in practice fight with Renji - the mind at this point in the storyline either still studying at the academy or in the fifth division would be stationed - plot holes!
Renji does not reach its ! Captain quickly he can to the 4th Division. Captain Unohanna takes equal in the treatment of Byakuya. Breathing heavily, he is placed in a treatment room. She sends all other Members from the room. Unohanna checked out its organs, the vital signs and blood. None shows signs of a disease. She decided to wait until he wakes up. But this is more difficult than expected. Byakuya is sleeping now for 3 days without waking once.
Yay, time warp again Byakuya And we already know all of the manga as a tender plant, after the victory Ichigo against him so he has also included the first five weeks in his room, the arms.
Ukitake Byakuya visited in the hospital room, because Byakuya is apparently woke up.
He sees him awake and out of the Window view. His eyes are slightly red as if he had been crying. Ukitake shook but only on that theory upside down. A Kuchiki does not cry. Ukitake closes the door behind him. Byakuya is aware of him and turns his head slowly to him. Byakuya looks at him sadly and imploringly.
* headdesk *
Yeah, exactly, Byakuya, this personification of aristocratic arrogance, is howling at the window and asks for help. Probably equivalent to a singing, dancing into the room and bouncing Hitsugaya Kenpachi has recently been afraid of blood.
Captain Ukitake. Can I ask you something? "Ukitake looks at him a little shocked. He has seen his former student before. "Of course, Byakuya." "What do I do. (Someone stole my all question marks.) The elders force me to a wedding. They have even put on tomorrow. The last few days were hell for me. I've been thinking about how I stop the wedding I kan but nothing occurred. I want Hisana not hurt or deceive. She was, no, is my great love. "
Ukitake Byakuya tells of his one-night stand with his dead wife a year ago, but insists that he has not only imagined. Ukitake reacts understandably a bit surprised when Byakuya Unohana breaks down again and it must be sedate. But the Kuchikis can not give in easily, and the wedding will take place anyway ('s also a damn if the groom is in an artificial coma, the main thing is married!).
Aya is brought by her two attendants to the altar. There "waiting" Byakuya. His eyes and his expression show that he is there physically but not mentally.
Yeah, Byakuya's eyes are more communicative than himself!
Ukitake is held at the entrance of the Kuchiki estate of two guards. Renji is also not in the interior of the property.
Er ... and why? Well, Renji is any level without Shinigami or student who would kill Byakuya like that one is not pure it can be understandable, but why do Jushiro stay outside? Meeh?
Byakuya and Aya are in any case by a priest (!) dared the Byakuya looks worried.
Byakuya also noticed the condition in which it is located. But to tip over easily, that he can not. But his pride and his will is too strong.
quick release! Byakuya! After all, is actually sometimes a spark IC discover incredible!
Following is a Christian wedding ceremony, but Byakuya is the bride the "yes" guilty.
"Lord Kuchiki w" With a loud bang was suspended the pastor. Two guards come running with a woman. She fights to free himself. Creates it. "Let me at once! I need to Byakuya Kuchiki. "" Shut up you disturb here and why should a nobleman of his size with a citizen like you Rumschlag.
Woow, slowly. She says she wants to Byakuya. The guards say no. And then they drag in the middle of the ceremony? Man, that must be the worst guards in all of Seireitei! : D Byakuya is
least shaken by this sudden interruption.
"Let is going on. I want to know what they want. " Can it really be that she has a message from Hisana.
And he suspects, because tree?
The woman grabs instead of a response from a set, explaining that the (again) late Hisana has sent them.
Byakuya took her to his private rooms. The woman closes the door behind him and Byakuya drops to his knees. "What happened to Hisana. (Where are all question marks. Why do I sound so bored incredible.) This can not happen again not. I would not want to lose it again. "" I've had me yet presented. My name is Yuan. "But Byakuya does not react.
Oh wonder, he asks her what and she imagines what they expected?
Yuan Byakuya handed the bundle in which, SURPRISE SURPRISE, is a baby!
"They appear to you has already taken her to heart. Hisana would be glad to see that her daughter her father has been so close to my heart. "" What? My daughter. " He can not believe it. A daughter. He has a cute little daughter her mother is cut out of the face.
Ergo, she looks like Rukia. Which the whole fanfic about apparently in complete nirvana is.
The wedding party is waiting for the missing groom (it was also rude of him not simply to let all stand in the middle of "I do" to talk with any running up women).
Aya particularly worried. It has for years been looking forward to this wedding and is said to be state or destroy all these Woman.
And I thought, this wedding had been planned recently?
Byakuya opened in any case all that the wedding is called off again and the baby to be his successor. He also throws the elders of the house. Nice as always.
Just outside Ukitake and Renji are still prevented by the guards from coming into the estate. "Why not let us inside. We must prevent the marriage. "" What wedding Renji? There is no wedding. "" Huh, but but you do today "" Renji is very confused look on his captain smiling and happy.
Byakuya tells the guards, Renji and Ukitake let go and put the elders on the street. Then he explains how he suddenly comes to the child. "Yes and no. Hisana in this world is dead, but in another she has lived until recently. Her body has not been through the ordeal of birth. She died after birth. She asked her friend if she my Daughter can bring. "
Yes, it is also totally does not matter that your wife is in another world perishes miserably again, the main thing you're happy. How easy it is to the world. Byakuya decides the girl (creative, creative) to baptize in the name of "Hisa". Plotvehicle! Yuan, now called Juan, disappeared without trace from the scene.
comes to finally a nice corny romantic end, in which Byakuya with Hisa sits under a cherry tree and Hisana promises to take care of her daughter always good.
are thus we then also already at the end of the two One Shots arrived, I thank you for your attention. Happy New Year to you all: D
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