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¡Bienvenidos a Sueco Mundo!

title of the story: Espada - Awakening

Authors: namie_chan and YuikoHiruma

Fandom: Bleach

anti quality of the characters: Sue's as plain and simple two from the textbook.

quirks in the style: What terms padded paragraphs, here, not spilled. In addition, volatility and typos, mangled grammar and chronic Kommatamangel. And everything is worn.

Positives: The present tense is maintained throughout, direct speech is for once correct.

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The girl remains in a large door, like a goal is like (and kaaleo beats her head on the table what a relief resembles) it pops up and see she does (AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!) an oval table with 11 seats. This room is decorated with columns (with tinsel and confetti) .
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As the story so far only two chapters and a prologue, and there also seems to have been discarded, we begin first with the right characteristics detailed biographies of the two ladies Sues:

Yuiko Nagakura

personality: shy silent, sad but strong

Yuiko was disowned by her mother, she would never have (She probably just realized that it is the child being an Emo-Sue acted) . As a child, the others were afraid of her but the reason is unclear (All others were a child?) . Yuiko was banned one day ever again to say a tone she had used to sing as a Hollow attacking their city (Ahm. .. very logical indeed. In addition, normal people, if I remember correctly, Hollows do not see ...) . Since her she remains silent and says hardly a word only if it is necessary to get away from her and a few notes out (Yay, Complex! Sue with a tragic past!).
One day her mother decided to principles to an end and gave her daughter a deadly poison. What veräzte her lungs and she climbed, read Yuiko died at the age of 16. (This punctuation ~>. \u0026lt;) Aizen see my girl in an obedient servant and the girl he decided to make it an Arrancar. (which is pretty rubbish. To become an Arrancar, they would have to first become a Hollow. Logic?)


Altesse Namie (By the way, is not only user and Suename identical. In addition, both called her OC in One Piece and D. Gray Man Fanfics and its own series as well)

Hollow mask. hip (Hm, I also have hip bones that make me now. an Arrancar)
Resurrección: Golondrina Emperatiz (Is there really know ...)
character confident bitchy, wild, cocky (Here goes the Sue)

Namie lived in! a small, (sings She is the dancing queen ~ *) from b agläubischen village . There, there was a sect die den Engel Gabrielle anbeteten.
Auch waren unter ihnen Menschen die die Hollows sehen konnten, diese wurden im Dorf als Heilige angesehen. (Sicher. Menschen, die Monster sehen können, die die Seelen anderer Menschen fressen, müssen heilig sein.)

Namie war als kleines Kind fröhlich und lustig, doch wurde sie gehänselt und verspottet da sie nicht perfekt war, so wie es die Sekte vorschrieb das Gesetz der Sues besagte .
Um ihren Willen zu brechen gekam sie von dem Dorfältesten ein Schwert in ihre rechte Hüfte rein geramt. (Aber dann hat sie doch eine Narbe und ist noch weniger perfect! What does not do anything for a tragic past ...) But the real problem was her green eyes. The community saw them as the death because they had the same color as the poison. At 22 Birthday Namie attacked a Hollow and brought death and destruction. Blames the people as punishment for the girl and burned her sieauf the stake. (.. Stop, stop the stake in France, which sounds like the Middle Ages This fits the front and rear, not the fandom timeline Lo ~ gik.?)


Prologue: The pain is black aka "The brain does hurt "

The night is dark and especially in that black (The After ... in the dark? Huh?) because death takes two young and innocent souls. Once invisible and silent, sometimes painful and visible. (What indecisive for a death. Apart from that I doubt that the cauterization of the lung is not painful ...)
But what happens to them afterwards? Find your peace? Are they born again? Or their jellyfish are there even more? (Or will their jellyfish washed away with the flood of rhetorical questions?)

Cut: Mutation to Hollow - in record time, as it seems. Hollows also with swords. Canon, where are you?


Two souls aka "Two Sues"

monitors equipped in a quiet room with a mirror on the wall, two chairs and an oval window with three columns a girl himmelartgien in a bed on (Ui, one with clouds and rain form?).

your eyes wander across the room and her confusion became greater (as her eyes danced merrily through the window) because on the last thing to remember the girl was is fire, the fire that burned her skin and the votes they cursed. (What does not make sense, because remember the Arrancar yes to her time as Hollows.)

"Was the only egg con dream?" With slow steps, she goes to the big round mirror. She hesitates a bit because she is afraid, afraid that she is disfigured by burns (Oh goodness gracious, her perfect Sue-appearance may have been damaged!) but her body does not hurt (The work should You have no burns, stupid nut). look carefully inside it, the mirror shows a young woman with brown, short hair and bright green eyes in a white robe which barely covered her chest (= Sue-Sue Bitch in the outfit). you may indeed have However, no Branntwunden decorated a black hole (This creates a real, masseverschlingendes black hole?) her body below her chest.

"A nightmare .... that can only be a nightmare." She stammers in front of them while her body shakes. (After all, you're not burned, so listen up crying.) noticed only after a few minutes, they produce neither the hole nor the bone in her body pain (* headdesk * What a long, long line, this for Sue?)

you was not the only one awake in this moment. (Maybe their brain cells, too? * Hopes *) A space is more a young girl, also in a white robe and a black hole over half of her breast, while fleeing from her room. It has black and blonde, short hair (a Chihuahua and a condo) protrude behind something. They, too, with light green eyes (on a tray in front of it) is but the rights of her hair covered (which she had draped as a garnish on a plate.)

The girl remains in a large Tü , r are like a goal is like (and kaaleo beats her head on the table resembles something of a relief) see it pops up and it does (AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!) an oval table with 11 seats. This room is decorated with columns (with tinsel and confetti) .

Now she wants to see what this means for a place that looks like the sky from the optical and the atmosphere is like hell (Hm .. white walls make a hell of Sue as soon fear? How embarrassing)

Cut. Namie finds Sue No. 2 from behind a pillar.

She also has a bone of her spine goes (hum, hum, Make way for the bone in his Ferrari!) , the brunette typing them on the shoulder to

"I'm Namie, Namie Altesse. And what's your name? " is the name of the young woman with brown hair cut short (I was thinking almost as she had imagined it) is.

"Yu ... iko ... Nagakura." Namie she reveals in a low voice. Now is also the second name like (in this epic ridiculous battle of the authorial narrative perspective) and as if it were not such foreknowledge is a person immersed in the space on (link?) . The person is male and wears black, long hair, an eye patch on his left eye and a sneer on his lips (Tows a whole lot around with you, the good Nnoitra. Normally, the Tesla would still provide it?)

"So so, since it so the new ones at the Los Nómerus. (\u0026lt;-. Fail at English)? "

" And you are "Namie asks suspicious the over 2 meter types.

"That was not interested in you, since only pets of Lord Aizen."

"pets? Hmph, that says all things, a guy who looks like a clown? "Grumbles back the brunette and stands between the great man and Yuiko. (! Wow, quick witted Sue teh to rescue 11 Which reminds me it is not clear what exactly look like clown moderate to Nnoitra Jiruga ...)

Cut: Nnoitra packed Namie - yet another merkwü Rdiger figure appears to her rescue! Well, who could that be ...?

With his hands in his pockets is the pale type to look at the three, his eyes are cold and are green marks the same as tears marked (fact tags mark? Since laundry re on it now I never come! kaaleo like how stupid) seems

Cut. Ulquiorra Nnoitra insulted and ordered to Sue to come with him to Lord Aizen.

Namie eyes the emotionless he types with just a bone if only on the Kop as a part of a helmet looks (and where the commas are actually all go?)

"This is Ulquiorra, I I carry the two women. "with the sentence, the door opens (named Ulquiorra) and in a large hall, a kind of throne is at a brown-haired man is sitting.


Can you kill? aka "Or even better one, you die?"

The hall is equipped with columns, like every room, the floor was in a deep black and not a single ray of light through the window can to penetrate (because the window, armed to the teeth, makes the light fierce resistance) . What was the only place whose shapes resembled one still does not like angels and demons? (Aha, being with skull helmets, vertical pupils and funeral pallor probably not see demonic from how)

"My name is Aizen, Aizen and her Lord since here in Hueco Mundo." (\u0026lt;-? Again, fail at English)

" ; Were they the one who called us? And why we have such holes in our bodies? "Asks Namie and shows with her hand on the hole (The more concrete you have already, or you yet Aizen explains what a belly button.).

Cut: Aizen said that he would never let go two such talented Sues ladies through their fingers, and therefore brought their souls before they left the body and turned them into Arrancar.

The girls head not because they did not even know the Shinigami exist nor that there are beings like Arrancar and Hollows. (And I thought they would be able to see Hollows? What a talent they should otherwise have had?)

"I insist for a long time and have you seen over the years. (Stalker! Aizen has to do not only nothing else better to spy than two Sues, like forging, for example, plans for the destruction or Seireiteis Espadas created ...) You were treated like trash by the people because you obviously Sues they're afraid of you. Yuiko, you have forbidden them to speak, have beaten up and even your own mother, yet so contrary Dieche though you're a good girl, obedient and loyal. And Namie. Before you they were scared because you bear the death in your eyes, ridiculous, I see them as something else (namely, the Sue-Power of doom!) . Now I give you here with the opportunity to rake you (Garden Center Hueco Mundo! Might be here even grow tea plants but if the Sue's raking ... properly) but you must promise to give me to me to be. "Without long to think one agrees Yuiko (She is, in fact as hollow as it looks) but Namie hesitates something and asks Aizen give her a night to think about it too would (As Aizen Sues these so badly that he is with them still decides to negotiate ... and what he has concluded ; Lich Kyoka Suigetsu)

"Why do you hesitate? Lord Aizen gives you an ideal opportunity for your pain accountable and do you hesitate? "Ulquiora asks as he turns up behind my girl. (Why this interests you at once? Neither weaker opponents nor the pain of the poor soul Sues are your problem.)

"And what about my family? She has tried to protect me all these years (while gloriously failed) and I should kill them? This is not your serious. (And when will someone asked you that you should do that? "Rake" can they be so to those who have burned ...) arrived "to the rooms, the discussion is between the two further. (Either they talk very slowly or have shortened the course.)

"What makes a difference whether they die now or later?" (Uhm. Lebensqualitä .. , t)

"I really have to listen to the no longer with. This is disgusting what you give them to you. (Yes, insulting someone who is stronger than you! Always a fabulous Sue technology!) If I murder I were no better than those who killed micht. "She turns her back to and it looks to the side a lowered glance. (... turning its back and looks at him the same side? Rubber spine! Sue!)

"You're taken me (as with a brush) the back ? Fool, this is not heaven, if you're not careful and you (in the left turn lane) place up here is far from expecting the worse and if I'm Jeniger the pain caused to you are you understand it, Ma . girls " (* headdesk *)

Cut: Nnoitra is of the opinion that one should teach manners of Sue.

"nerve me with your perverted fantasy. "says the pale, emotionless Ulquiorra as he moves away from the room (while the sun-tanned, Ulquiorra turned up singing merrily bounces around the room).

Cut: The Suez sit in the room and feel sorry for yourself

"I'm not angry with you because you can, Yuiko. If I knew that my mother never wanted me and kill me in the end I Währe perhaps as disturbed (Jawoll! road salt in the wounds of the psycho-Sue! Right on!) it is unfortunately not so (unfortunately? Sorry! you'd like to from your mother was abused mentally and physically?) . My parents, my twin brother have both micht always protected from harm until that day (where they realized that I really was Sue. You would have before simply can move away from the village they ... have probably always known) ... It's not. "She told the Yuiko you come closer, while the water drops seen by the cheek of the young woman roll down, it tears. (ne Oh, seriously? And I thought it would be Detergent ...)

Cut: More Sue-howling. Aizen and forges in the next room with a "dark smirk on his lips ominous plans.

How exciting. Unfortunately we will probably learn not remember if Namie Ulquiorras can soften the heart and Yuiko Nnoitras discovered delicate string. Too bad. Only someone brain bleach?