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Next date for writing sprints Sunday, 03.01.2010 writing mania by 19 clock in the AIM chat room. Simply write down pass, and mitquatschen! Every (r) is welcome. If you need an invitation, let me get your AIM name and I invite you then.

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writing sprints - this morning &

Maybe someone of you are so interested: we (me and a few other LJ people) are doing today and tomorrow write sprints in the AIM chat room writing mania. That is, one writes the whim of half-hour or 20 minutes, concentrated and babbles about writing in between, God and the world, or howls from the fact that the characters misbehave or do not want the story just as it would like. Every (r), the join / wants is welcome, with more people makes it even more fun.
Today we leave at 7, tomorrow at some point in the evening. This one may come at any time - either just passing me know, or with your AIM name to say (here or via PM), then I invite you into the chat room.

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writing in other cultures

You think so, if you can play a story in America, we can not really do much wrong in terms of cultural background. After all, everything is almost like us.
here but there is a text that explains what can go wrong in spite of everything, and how to make it better. Although the text refers to actually Supernatural fanfiction, but is very helpful for all writers.

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For all NaNo writers

As long as the part held by it ... Here is a sequence of Writing Excuses, the tips for NaNoWriMo is there.
http://www.writingexcuses.com/2009/11/22/writing-excuses-season-3-episode-26-nanowrimo/
(In English.)

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crime Aussschreibung

The Publisher Heinrich Tüffers looking for a thriller anthology of short stories:

murder? Tax evasion? Manslaughter? Dive with the readers into the minds of the perpetrators, victims and investigators. Find new nuances in common crime and confront the investigators, private investigators or curious citizens with it. Forest by old and new laws to subtleties and kidnap us and your readers into the abyss, of which hardly a single person has ever heard or read ... In other words: Let off steam off!

We look forward to realistic crime stories on German soil and on the basis of German law, be it current or historical.

For more info go here: http://www.heinrich-tueffers.de/

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Happy Halloween!

It's been over a year ago that I panned the first chapter of the Supernatural Fanfiction Supernatural stories. To go with Halloween now chapter two of the now deleted Wrongdoing. There

Chapter One's here

title of the story: Supernatural stories

Author: Kari_Yagami (formerly-Sam_Winchester)

Fandom: Supernatural
Timeline: Season 1
Plot: Sam and Dean hunt somewhere in Iowa, a spirit with a penchant for repetition
anti quality of the characters: Dean is about as intelligent as a flower pot , Sam a bitchy crybaby

spelling, grammar and style: passable, some typos and tense errors, chronic Konjunktionenmangel which / that

~ "Looking for something bestimtes" asked Dean with his mouth full. Sam looked at him with raised eyebrow. " (You know that I have lost my brain in here somewhere!) I Do not know yet." He said briefly. Dean looked a bit puzzled, had already served a yes or no, (everything he did anyway, with its three remaining brain cells) but he went on eating anyway. Had ( it every time he saw something in this FF not at dinner waived, he probably would have starved) ~



Chapter 2: 2. Grave stone


Cut: A mix of the original opening credits and quotes from Chapter 1

It was raining like cats and dogs, as Iowa was flooded (as if it is "like" s raining had). Jim worked but not further at its biggest factory. He put her grave stones and always thought it the perfect job for it was. He ran this business for many years now. It was for him a kind of art and like any other. (For example, the fine art of record linkage. Had it done to him.) Suddenly a woman came and entered the backyard of the house where Jim was working hard. The woman had no umbrella, rain was wet and otherwise dressed simply. (All right. Will it rain with the clothes can not say you simply wet. No more overdressed! I should patent to me.) The older man she noted. (Jim can duplicate it and apparently age.) "Hello, I can help them, "he asked and made a gesture that s they should come to him. She stepped closer to him. "I want a Garbstein" she said shockingly direct. (OMG, how unexpectedly, where she is still in a transaction for grave stones!) . Jim was taken aback a bit. Your request would be clear to him, (he was only not quite as bright) but he was rather confused by their clear expression. (So yes, the right one can not formulate. "I would like a stone, sculpture, decorated with engravings in the form of a box for a sacred, located outside court. "So goes this) He nodded anyway. "Have you any idea," he said and led her to exhibit pieces. "It must be simple ... he would like. (who, the stone grave?) antworetet "and she looked him straight in his eyes (Ui, the grave stones have eyes!) . He ran down the back Ice cold, he gulped and showed her a marble from (known to the simplest and cheapest material) , which what Paltz only for the name and was the Personal Data (age, date of birth, occupation, eye color, favorite musicians, etc.) . The woman shook her head. "For too significant. I want a concrete, "she commanded. Jim took a piece. (Was squeezed in the middle of this purely as an incoherent sentence.) It is much thunder and lightning, "Well, may I ask for when the stone is to be," he said gently and stepped back even further. The long black hair of the woman stuck to her wet body. She turned her head slowly in his direction, looking ( him for not threatening to the whole time?) their facial expressions made a derogatory term (A personalized facial expressions, yes ...) . "No one will remember you," she said. Her eyes disappeared, there were n ur still black hull (So my eyes have a spherical shape. How should the sleeves be? So with curtains or what?) . Jim was terrified and wanted in his home race, but he stopped and looked down at himself. (In these dirty clothes he could not easily go to his house!) The hand of the woman had rt by its hull born h and now Inexhaustible much blood ran down. Again it flashed when the man fell to his knees. (If "knee" is a form of mud?) "No one will remember you!" (you repeat yourself.) said the woman and tore out his heart with a jolt. With the blood on her hand, she labeled the grave. "James Ford (And why do all the time" Jim "?) 1948-2008 ."...

The next morning was the last night fade. (This is generally also called the dawn.) The rain disappeared and the sun shone on the small little town. Sam and Dean were sitting in a cafe and had breakfast while Sam flipped hard in the newspaper. (Weak! Sammy is too weak to turn the page. Dean probably has eaten him his breakfast.) "Looking for something bestimtes" asked Dean with his mouth full. Sam looked at him with raised eyebrow. " (You know that I have lost my brain in here somewhere!) I Do not know yet." He said briefly. Dean looked a bit puzzled, had already served a yes or no, (everything he did anyway, with its three remaining brain cells) but he went on eating anyway. (he had every time he saw something in this FF not dispensed to the meal, he probably would have starved.) Sam remained in an article available. (Already in chapter one wrong, this formulation.) He screwed up his face in disgust, which which Dean gave him attention. His little brother showed him the text and get a "nice" photo. "Dude, I'm eating!" Unruly Dean said. (Bitchy! Dean. But since when it holds for the sight of some body parts from the food?) The photo showed a man next to a terribly the dressed with Blutbeschrifteten grave. (So the newspaper said that I see. Or the lousy crime scene barricade.) The article told (certain is that there is a newspaper and not a horror novel?) was how the man in the same night (in which the brain eaters of Dean and Sam were attacked) and the theories of his death. (The experts were not agreed whether the lack of heart or the logic was.) Dean Mustt laugh as Sam read that some people suspected that he stumbled on the grave stone. (And it is the heart fell out, and has painted the grave stone ... So the very first-class police work that I expected in such a FF.) "So a new job for us," said the ä ; older Winchester. "Looks like." Confirmed Sam and stood up. After a trip

'in the Impala while Sam was asleep. Dean looked at him briefly. (Dean, you have to concentrate on the traffic! Multitasking is not in there with so little brain!) Unfortunately, it looked like this as if Sammy again a nightmare. His suspicions were confirmed when his little brother woke up suddenly. When Sam saw Dean in his face, he slowly realized that it was only a dream. "From what you have for this time again schnuckliges dreaming?" Dean asked, annoyed. (Aha, protector! Dean is unnerved them that his little brother nightmares. Total IC.) Sam saw him almost shocked at (but only almost, because something was absolutely not here to Canon .. .) "Say, do you think I do that on purpose or what?" he replied grimly. "Did I say not yet," replied bitchy Dean, but when he saw Sam was still shocked by his dream was he let loose. "What happened?" He asked in a calm tone. "Nothing, never mind." Sam said, turning away his head out the window. His big brother was on instead of getting it escalated. (Sam could throw it with cotton-wool!)
finally arrived they went out of the car and looked at the concerns of the deceased. (We had that concern = Order, Please;! = Large estate house and land, Anyway. is Dean this time not stepped on.) Both he (The Lord or what?) and "his" grave stone had been taken away by police, but much blood was dipped slowly into the wet, schlamige Earth was still visible . "Very appetizing ..." Dean said and took out his MEF (* headdesk *) .

Cut: The "MEF" beats out easily, Dean suspects a ghost. That's it with his bright moment, he has to explain that is by Sam leave, which he needs a fake FBI badge and send him People ask.

"Well done. What else? Or was it that you a pro? "The smaller of the Winchester said sarcastically. (We are talking about the way of 1.90 m Sam ...)

Cut: Dean, in addition to the phone numbers of the daughters of the house also found out that the murdered man was different in the past.

"Wait, I think they said ... "Ford". " (Of course, Dean's a beginner in the field of research and remembers those facts do not even) Sam was startled. "Jim Ford? The name I have ever on the grave stone blutbeschrifteten seen in her father's diary, "he said, and fumbled the above question from his pocket. Dean watched Sam stretched it in the diary leafed (Ui, Sammy can scroll effortlessly anyway!) stopped and suddenly a text. (* headdesk *)

Cut: In John's ultra-professional diary entry is that even the good colleague Jim died in the same way. However, he had no desire to investigate the case further. Or so.

Cut 2: Sam wakes up in the night by a wailing, and sees the ghost outside the window.

The next morning, Sam woke up first, as always in fact (Hey, a spark IC!) . He got up and walked a bit, but he immediately wanted to ask a few people. Pöltzlich met him a young woman. "Sam? Is it you? "She asked, surprised. Sam examined her briefly. (Bwahaha, Doctor Sam investigates the people he meets just on the street ...) "Maria? Hey, how are you? What are you doing in Iowa? "Asked Sam also verdunzt.

Cut: Sam cries for Jess.

But then she could not resist a question on (A wonderful change of subject:) . "You Sam, Rebecca (Episode 6) told me about you and your brother Dean. Is that was your job? I bet Becky has just made a joke right? "Maria grinned slightly (And then please explain how Dean's official funeral?) . The young Winchester was such a good liar, but he could not, even a sound to bring out staa, he looked nervous back and forth (Dun dun DUN! Sam , is the first year of life lies in training again, so it can not simply nod?) . Sam could not explain it, but it had a strange feeling (That's FF-induced nausea, as usual, do not worry.) . "Becky was telling the truth?" Asked Maria something (insert adjective here * missing *) . "Well ... maybe ... uh ... yes ... (oder. .. not ... ääääääääääähm ....) "he finally antworetet. Maria smiled. "Nice to see you are honest." She said, turning slowly (And this truth, they can now so easily available in the room? Sure ...) .

Cut: Sam goes back to the motel. Dean reminded him on the news.

"All right, this Mary was your friend right?" Dean asked properly caring (Dean knows we all know that all of Sam's friends from Stanford.) . "You do not understand, Dean! I have just spoken to Maria, "said Sam. "Uh ... This is not quite, right? Mary Gordon was murdered yesterday night. "Dean said (Blitzmerker! Dean! Honestly, a logical tour de force!) . "Dean, now handed me slowly! Only Jim (ad V.: What is meant here actually Jack from Chapter One ...) that was not nearly close, and now Mary, with whom I probably would not talk to! "scolded by another Sam. "Well, either you ticks not quite clean, or someone will tell you something. "Dean said. (clear, and both possibilities does Dean relaxed. It really is not any dangerous when one's brother is turning and / or pursued by a ghost ...) "I'll go look at the cemetery if we find something to our mind. You can rest up because of me, so confused before you use anything. "Deans wording behavior was not the best completely OOC, but Sam knew to appreciate.

Cut: Sam goes to the cemetery to mourn Maria and is fixed by the gardener. Or so.

Sam betratt the floor of the church when he winced. (This sentence is a prime example of futility.) The pastor Smeared blood lay on the ground next to him a nochunbeschrifteter grave. Sam had not expected such to meet the desired spirit of a murdered priest in a church. This looked at him, her mouth full of blood, as well as the hands, Sam immediately fell on the eyes, flashed black (And I thought she had eyes instead of just "empty shells"?) . The ghost woman threw herself on the helpless Sam (Aw, helplessness! Sammy! And the sad thing is that he was already in Chapter One ...) , who struggled in vain. Suddenly he remembered the Dean's next door to the cemetery was (He did it while in the cemetery of "Metropolis" is not seen, but well ...) . "Dean ... Dean ... "he said, but the spirit continued choking him until he stayed away the air (he calls so while he is being strangled, and hopes that Dean him through the walls of the church to heard about the cemetery ...) . Behind the two suddenly appeared someone. Sam was now sure that Dean was right: He ticked not quite right (Could be due to the lack of oxygen on the hallucinations he is not mean to strangle , damn it.!) . "Jess?" He asked, with his last strength.
Dean talked further with the gardens (No, you have no missed cut. Anyway, you are not on the logic ...) . "All who died worked as a hearse drivers, grave stone manufacturers, Coffin manufacturers ..." said the gardener. Dean rolled his eyes, he knew what professions meant were Bestatunghelfer, mason and coffin-maker, the guy did not seem to be particularly clever (WTF? The whole FF behaves on the Dean as a completely under-exposed idiot and now he suddenly mutates to show-off know-it? ) . Suddenly he noticed something. "Hey missing, now just the priest." He said skeptically, and glanced at the church.

Cut: Jess to the Rescue rescues Sam with a fireball, he warns of "new evil forces" and comforts him with the fact that he should not blame him because they had not bought his warnings anyway. And then suddenly

Jess stopped him, they sealed his lips with hers. Sam was never kissed by a ghost, on the other hand, it was Jess, in any form (Yikes. That has to be incredibly romantic.) . Now the spirit wanted to attack (Nice of him that he has been waiting for.) . "What a mind," asked Sam. "Defend yourself Sam, she's a vengeful spirit. (If it were simply an evil spirit not of course you were allowed up to defend, and'd have to die a gruesome death.) "said Jess. The moment Dean came running into the church and took out his gun. (* If I say Colt? But I do not mean that Colt ... q0 / / x / / 0p ° ° *) (Die, Author comment! DIE!) "Sam? All iNORD ...." he broke off his sentence because he heard that Jessica was in the room (That he told the pink, winged unicorn. Or something.) . Jess smiled briefly. "I can go now. Dean has found out what it has to with the mind. "She said, and glanced at Sam. "No, wait," cried the latter. "Do not worry, I'll stay by your side." She promised, and disappeared. "Sam to get up," said Dean. "Where is the pastor?" Sam pointed to the blood-stained floor where the body lay (So Dean is not only stupid but blind ...) . The spirit laughed. "Too late," laughed the Geistergestallt. "I now know who this woman! Amy Cross, wife of Ben Cross. "Told Dean. "She takes revenge on the people who helped to bury her husband." Sam looked from the angry faces of his brother and the mind back and forth. "But why?" He asked. "Because her husband was buried alive, so!" (And why avenge his wife and not he himself?) The spirit was so angry that the two brothers were now in a circle of fire. "How do you know?" She cried. "I've talked to the gardener. Robert Cross, if I'm not mistaken. The brother of the deceased. (He tells Strangers like crazy all over his sister in law!) grinned, "Dean of victory. The ghost form was boiling with anger. Dean shot the woman several times until it is contorted with pain dissipated. (again: in the Supernatural universe dies a spirit not of rock salt!)

Cut: Sam is afraid that Jess is an evil spirit and howls around because of the botched job. Dean leaves him the Impala and he's happy again now ..


~ A happy Halloween to you all! : D ~

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End of the guest performance ...

After some consideration I have decided not to continue my blog on Live Journal.

Instead, I change to blog.de because there I have some functions that simply do not offer the Live Journal.

goes from now on it here:

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NaNoWriMo by writing

Is there an interest in special operations in the form of frequent progress posts for Nano? Or are the weekly posts enough? Please take part in the survey only if you will participate in NaNo, that want to actively participate in the progress posts.

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If 7-8 people are interested in more frequent posts, we must consider how we do it exactly, since neither mohya yet I NaNo participate (in other words, before volunteers!) ... But we will manage that then.

course, both during the NaNoWriMo welcome both before and after all sorts of NaNo-related assistance and Squee posts.

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Diaspora

Last Saturday we played Diaspora. There were two players present. If diaspora is first created the setting together and then the player characters for the setting. Diaspora is a "hard SF game", so a game that tries to Science to simulate Fiction based on currently known physics. The only concession is traveling faster than light to get from one planetary system to another. Hard SF is that there is no artificial gravity, no drives without reaction mass, and rarely aliens or psi powers.

diaspora based on FATE 3.0, as well as Star Blazers Adventures and Spirit of the Century (SOTC). Star Blazer Adventures is a game about rock and roll science fiction and so I will draw some comparisons below between the two games.

diaspora always plays made within a cluster of star systems that are connected together by the slipstream. Other clusters are rare and can only be achieved by chance (and then the return could be harder than you think). A cluster consists of 6-10 systems and each player and the GM would take over part of the systems. There were three, so each of us designed two systems. The systems I will post it in a later report, as a fellow player descriptions of their world has not yet finished. In the system for each system creation are three attributes (technology, environment and resources) fixed. Then it describes in the best manner of Fate, two aspects of the system. Then we determine how the systems together. Thereafter, each system gets a third aspect, which describes the space of the system in the cluster. It then entstandt a discussion between players can look like the relations of the systems.

Our cluster is partly dominated by Bask, a world that is dominated by cat people, and also by Cuchulain, a Celtic-tinged world that has no resources and operates more aggressive policy of expansion. Sooner or later there will probably be between Basques and Cuchulainn war.

The system was creating lively and interesting than the similar step in Star Blazers Adventures. Perhaps this was partly because I am in my role as a lead player just over the withdrawal, and the fact that is created in the Diaspora not only a sector of space, but virtually the entire "space" in which the game takes place.

Then it came to character creation. Went in two players and came out three interesting player characters (I want to play my absolutely times). As with all the characters in Play FATE phases are created. Each stage provides two aspects that describe the character and can be used in the game than advantages. Unlike Star Blazers and SOTC are the characters not the hero of her own novel / comics and the other characters act as guest stars, but each character is experiencing a crisis and the character of the player to the left side was involved in the crisis in any way. Conversely, describes the next phase as the has experienced the crisis character of the player to his left. The process takes a long time, but not longer than for other FATE games. After the 5 phases, each player out 15 skills and distributes them in a pyramid, a skill at +5, two to +4, contains three to +3, four and five to +2 to +1. The skills are different is somewhat different from the FATE games and are divided into four categories: classified tracks, battle, space and other expenses. Skills of the category Tracks modify Health, Wealth, and Composure. Battle-space and skills are just that. Everything that does not fit the other three categories. It is recommended that every character at least dominates a fight and a space craft. After the skills it comes to the stunts. Each character has three stunts and different from Star Blazers SOTC and there are no long lists, which make the selection of an elongated process, but for players to their stunts, in consultation with the other players and the game master himself entwerfen. Nach jeweils 5 Minuten hatte jeder seine Stunts beisammen. Dann wurde die Ausrüstung noch nach einer Liste verteilt, was man besitzt, wenn man bestimmte Fertigkeiten beherrscht (ähnlich wie in Reign). Zum Schluss haben wir uns noch Rüstungen und Waffen herausgesucht und das Spiel konnte beginnen.

Die Charaktere sind:

• Zhang Yu: Der Ingenieur unseres Schiffs und von Detroit geflohen, nachdem Triaden seinen Großvater umgebracht hatten
• Meorrw: Die Eignerin/Käptress der "Not Yet". Eine Katzenfrau vom Planeten Bask.
• Doctor Cornelius Vanderbilt: Navigator of the "Not Yet" that is fused in his youth Endymion with a strange apparatus.

Our mission began to Bask. Meorrw was inspired by Senator Rarrgh! wide bar (actually more scratch) to take on a reconnaissance mission to the Cuchulainn system because of feared the Senate Bask that there a secret invasion fleet is built. I had not read the chapter on the social struggle, so we have made such as Star Blazers. Meorrws player agreed with a concession to lose the fight (the aforementioned crawl). They struck a good Price out and took additional charge aboard because of Cuchulainn, after all, there are still "tense trade relations." Then she asked her navigator from the zenith of the Bask-system in the nadir of Cuchulainn system to jump. managed thanks to its psionic abilities of that too. Vanderbilt doctor navigates namely Psionic abilities and are not by Navigator. At the nadir point, we were attacked by a Patroullienschiff, but because our boat has superior technology that are found nowhere else in the cluster, we were able to escape the enemy quickly and follow a vector in the system interior. More

happened not in the session.

After the meeting we discussed more about the system. It turned out, namely that the issue "hard SF" is still getting used to. Namely, when eg scanning a system with the best attack and suddenly takes a spiral pattern over 100 days. When the game leader the 100 days it will not play, but time passes at a time with great strides.

What I like about Diaspora:

• The creation of the star cluster
• The creation of the characters
• Stunts are freely defined
• Hard SF is not represented by meticulous rules, but is in the narrative background
• ships are much easier to understand and concise illustrated than in Star Blazers Adventures
• diaspora is large and extensive A5 , t 270 pages, so I can do it in the truest sense of the word easier to take than the Cons 600 pages A4 Star Blazers Tome

What I do not like to Diaspora:

• In-game leader chapter will be made to about 50 pages from SOTC. The SOTC text is Open Game Content to my knowledge would have can therefore be printed for readers who have not SOTC.
• The Platoon Combat subsystem. The place could have been better used.
• The book was written as FATE alternative to travel. It shows. If you have never played Hard SF or read, some concepts are rather unclear
• advanced societies do ALWAYS! a major technological collapse. This game looks dystopian.

What I lack in Diaspora:

• Just those 50 pages from SOTC
• A chapter on modern astronomy
• a chapter or paragraph on Fleets and battles between them
• The promised Journal for spacecraft
• The utopian approach of travelers. It's cool to go to the stars!

So that is my first impression and also a game.

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player wishes

weekend I headed for the first time Diaspora. For this I will write more later. It is interesting to me was the discussion after the game. If one for over a year for a different group of role-playing systems leads to crystallize, and then articulate at some point actually even know what the players want. The list almost easy times to capture the imagination of my group of players together.

• just play vampires. play off play off
• Travel
• The daily life of the characters
• A campaign for several years playing
• from the game master just sprinkle just let itself without having to decide where the story goes
• player characters can die if the dice so require
• settings where you can be cool
• No Reign
• not play in social interaction rules
• grasp on time start
• The player characters are all part of the same organization
• With three players play
• With five players play
• play no settings that are known from TV, films and books are
• No Warhammer 40K as ; setting
• All players integrate directly into the game
• The "campaign" from the outset only interpret to 2-3 game nights
• It is important to play out the interaction among the characters than the adventure to get ready
• ...

The list is not exhaustive. If add my players there's what you want: just write a comment or email.

Added to that my wishes as a game manager and it will be interesting to find the intersection:

• try out systems that are already in the closet for years, or were acquired on a spending spree (see previous post)
• No Vampire play
• try my own world
• Warhammer Rogue Trader guide
• travel and everyday life can go by the board
• play scenes that keep the action moving
• With 4 players play
• No long breaks by food
• Every Saturday guided
• No boredom in the game
• No eternal discussions about plans
• An adventure game = one session

The art of the director, then, is his own desires with the Wü ; Payment: to marry the player. For role-playing games is supposed to be fun all stakeholders, not just the game master or just the players.

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story so far ... (Or the guild of fishermen living)

long 11 days, no new entry. That was not planned. Well, last weekend I was in the Con 2009, Dungeons Reimlingen. It was very nice, although I have more Dominion (Game of the Year 2009) did a role play. A round REIGN came together and we have created the world according to Star Blazers rules themselves. The process I have tried out for the first time in a fantasy kingdom. As it were, the last round of the cons and was already late in the evening, the setting was not to be taken seriously.

The players had formed a guild of life fishing, fishing the zombies from the sea and by allied Necromancer again makes them productive members of society. Her current mission is to build a wall to keep out the zombies from a part of the kingdom.

The dead are in this World towards the sea on rafts sent - are the same sea from which later the zombies. There is a magical forest that was cut down to make the wooden molds, pour the lava stone in the form ... all very allegorical. One of the players said that the world is a metaphor for environmental pollution. Interpretation of what is great.

The guild got their contract, because a member of the Queen's beautiful shoes made. Shoe is also the term for hybrids in the Kingdom ...

The real action is set to be demons, old signs, family history, I (I your father ... Luke) and the son of the Queen.

The long-term outcome of the cons was to me to buy Dominion and the Dominion-Extension. Together with various role-playing, which in Germany is finally available. But more on that next entry.

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Children and Youth Book Prize

Maybe one of you more books for a younger audience and has even been in what.. the drawer:

Children and Youth Book Prize of the Munich Mercury, Michael Meller Literary Agency and the Arena-Verlag

If you look at the parties that sounds really big for a chance: D

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Writing Excuses

Who can speak English, should have a listen to this podcast . There are some good tips for writing and also at the end of each episode a prompt.

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Dark Punk or label wear

There are over here in the role play scene like over there across the pond two keywords, which are now used so often that they are meaningless. The words not to be "Dark" and "punk". In Germany for the World of Darkness "-is the wave of success in the 90s in all the" dark " to call. It remains completely open, was "dark" everything is. It is bleak, "grown up" it should be, and somehow you have to do with horror. After so much now as "dark," it is really dark everywhere. Just what constitutes the darkness, remains beyond the key word in the blurb completely undefined.

viewed with "punk" is almost the same, but "punk" is mainly overseas. It started with "Gothic punk", then there was "Steam Punk" Germany came in "Primal punk" to the latest creations and overseas are "Medicine punk" (as a statement of Unhallowed Metropolis) and "Runepunk. A friend recently "Rogue Trader" and the Warhammer 40K universe known as "Space Punk".

What is Punk? White Wolf has not defined what they mean by "Gothic punk". The other publishers, feel as less great pains, which means their individual tastes of "punk."

Steampunk stands out as yet because Steampunk is a term that has spread beyond the role play. Literature, trading under the term, there is steampunk music and there is a steampunk cosplay. Steampunk seems simple steam technology to be combined with Victorian society. Well this is easy and prevails.

Primal punk, punk and Medicine Runepunk other hand, seem just terms for the laundry list be without providing content.

Conclusion: More content and less concept pods do the RPG market well. Do not just still shape a new concept of art, but provide better content.

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Savage Exalted - a converted Setting

setting conversion

I like the world of Exalted . I like the ideas that White Wolf has put into the setting. What I do not like is the gaming system. If you regularly 20-30 ten pages and must throw dice count, that's neither fast nor furious fun. I just had the idea of the setting on Savage Worlds converted to.

with a very simple trick, the player characters to Exalted. You get a higher wildcard dice. A "normal" wild card company may also throw always a D6. So I design talents to increase the general wildcard dice. So then, a Solar or Abyssal Exalted W10, a Lunar or Sidereal Exalted Dragonblooded W6 W8 and throw a wild card dice. If you're not Exalted is automatically without extra wildcard dice. Of course you can also drag the dice a little upward. For example, Solar / Abyssal W12, Lunar / Sidereal W10, W8 Dragonblooded, God-blooded and whatever else rumkrebst W6. Maybe that's even better distribution. Of course, a character must have a corresponding edge in order to be Exalted. The advantage of Edges is then increased wildcard dice. The wildcard dice then symbolizes the essence of a character without accounting.

The game is an Arcane Background (Magic), access to the powers is not regulated by the ranks of heroes, but about talent (Terrestrial, Celestial and Solar Circle). Terrestrial Circle Sorcery granted the skill (mind). The forces are then divided among the three places. The

not quite unimportant manifestation of the Essence would I settle on aces. Each time the dice rolls a wild card ace (ie the highest value and nachwürfeln) the manifestation increases by one step. The same applies if a Joker is drawn at the initiative or if the player outputting a Benny.

course, apply to the setting the following switches: heroism, epic heroism, heroes, with an error. Mumm eliminated as a skill, because none of the horror aspects of the setting.

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Eclipse phase or "Why are W100 system bad?"

Today, on the occasion of the publication of Eclipse phase a brief excursion into the role of game design. Eclipse phase looks cool, is incredibly colorful and ultimately deter me from despite the interesting subject (transhumanism) from the purchase. And that scares me off the system. Eclipse phase skills used in the W100 or percentage system (as well as RuneQuest, Call of Cthulhu or a state /). These are all not the first choice as game systems, although a / state also offers an interesting setting. There is also a tangible reason, namely those mentioned W100.

There are basically four types of systems in role-playing dice:

• roll under: you roll under a certain number If you still want to determine the degree of success, you have to throw most of the Pull on the skill or attribute. Bonus and penalty are charged with the skill or attribute value.
• Roll over: you roll over a certain level of difficulty. The degree of success is determined by subtracting the Ziehlzahl in the throwing motion. Bonus or penalty will be charged to the union and compared with the target number.
• dice pools: Man rolls a number of dice (often the sum of attribute + skill) and see how many cubes are on a specific Ziehlzahl. The number of dice on the Ziehlzahl is the sum of the results. Bonus or penalty can be either to exist to modify the Ziehlzahl or the fact that one more or less dice rolls.
• Würfellos: The fourth "cube system" is characterized by the absence of dice cards instead be used.. These times more in a later blog entry. Here is the "cube" method only for completeness.

Personally I consider rolling over and dice pools (which also contain an element of rollovers) to tinker as the most elegant methods cube systems. Both systems are usually very visual and use manageable number of rooms.

roll under is by comparison quite complicated. Most people can add up much better and faster than subtract. Moreover, forcing a bonus or penalty to the skill or attribute to rethink. I will add / subtract something from a number and compare the new number (which I have only in the mind) with the roll of the dice. The brakes made.

is particularly bad is when you no longer convenient in the number range from 1-20, but in the bulkier number range is from 1-100. Since one can already in the middle of playing into the Stocken come. The W100 disturbs the flow of the game so much. The

then continues forward. For skills in the number range from 1-100 skill points required in the number range of 100-1000. That
awarded at the character creation I suddenly huge amounts of points. Here, it is usually still a corrective installed so that cost certain values (such as 70-80%) no longer a point for each%. That is all very tedious and computationally intensive.

addition, a percentage system seems accurate. It reflects in front of you a skill that pilot 56% is better than a 55% pilot skill. She is not. The difference between 55% and 56% skill in the game makes itself noticeable only if I really 100 times and more dice on this skill. Except for the fighting skills should occur in the average role-playing little. In contrast, the difference between +11 and +12 is evident in skill after 20 throws. On

It is best if the system can only player ever to distribute 50-20 at a time, then one can estimate much better if the character can be built as you like. At this point I commend times Warhammer Fantasy Role Play (1st and 2nd edition), Dark Heresy and Rogue Trader. Although the percentage system, they circumvent elegantly above cliffs.

If a game designer, says so use the W100 to have to let him but please make sure that the incredible sums of points which are necessary for creating a new character to be awarded in small bites.

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A confession ... and a review

I'm an undecided match officials. There are many systems that will guide me, I usually do not stay long in a role-playing system. Of course there are games to which I return again and again, such as vampires (whether Requiem, masquerade or Old World). But since I usually play only 12-13 games evenings a chronicle, then forward something else and later return back to Vampire (Often the same players, characters and locations). Nevertheless, I lack a certain consistency.

For about a year I have a large group of players, which is 3-4 every week, who introduces me to play. That would actually speak for stability. Nevertheless, I have conducted over the past year a number of different systems:

• Houses of the Blooded (this all started!)
• Vampire: The Requiem (in between just had to be back)
• REIGN (because I thought that my own fantasy world "Dragon Throne" to implement)
• Mongoose Traveller (just for testing)
• Star Blazer Adventures (3.0 FATE like me and it has great game mechanics and you can use Fudge dice)
• Rogue Trader: Forsaken Bounty (The Rogue Trader Einführungsabenter for Free RPG Day 2009)

Houses of the Blooded appeared in the preview version as an interesting game for blood, revenge and ambition. The full version is similar but a "regular Bible", just as large, confused and in need of interpretation. The author did not helped the process of finding his own has rules in the head, which either do not agree with what he has written, or were simply not written in the book. Nevertheless, we have Houses of the Blooded played half a year until it was too colorful to me.

have the beginning of the year, we then tried out REIGN, I wanted to know how well you can translate my concepts for dragon throne with REIGN. Worked very well, then I have somehow lost the target (Dragon Throne) develop in the eyes, a reaction with REIGN requires quite a bit of their own work before you can play, and I also wanted to travel (by about Try 20 years) at last.

Traveller we played three times, then I realized that Traveller is very random one hand and on the other hand requires very much preparation in the form of sub-sectors. The, by today's standards, over-Random means that the players rarely get the character they want. Furthermore, the control system leads to success remain with ability samples, even with relatively good values quite by accident. So let wirs. This was followed

Vampire: The Requiem. But again, I did despite not exciting player characters of the hatch in the preparation. The last 4 years I had always played in my coastal town Breemer, but this time it should be London. The mutated from Vorbereitungsnot of New Orleans (because it is a source tape), only to be set by me in favor of Star Blazers Adventures. There was a reason: I've noticed that myself after 12 years of vampire-passing out of ideas that inspired me. Too bad, because Vampire: The Requiem was among the players inside the game konsenzfähigste. All the players felt with the game well and at the table came up with a lot of fun.

Star Blazer Adventures I have managed a total of four times, then external circumstances necessitated a pause. From the break, then a summer break, which runs until today. The three plays have all seen different adventure. The first my attempt, the five-part campaign "Medusa Dreaming" was revived. Since the second session completely different players at the start were (yes, you may be a player pool of 10 players that happen), I started an adventure to a diplomatic team. The third time exactly one player from the first group and a player from the second group were there. Out of necessity I made a virtue out and played with both a history. The fourth time was at the Free RPG Day in Nuremberg. There we played a background to the settings with fighter pilots. That was it first with Star Blazers Adventures.

Forsaken Bounty for Rogue Trader we played as a one-shot on a Sunday, because I absolutely times Wolte role play again.

And now I am undecided as lead player with the task of reviving my role-play round after the summer break. The blog will explain my decision-making and support.

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page formatting manuscript

I have a question for those who already have more manuscripts submitted for contests or publishing. In a competition the standard format for manuscripts is required, which would 30 lines of 60 characters per page .

Can you possibly tell me what font (font size should probably be mostly 12 and 1.5 spacing) and that which border the width of the page formatting? Would be sufficient justification or a better right alignment?

thank you very much in advance. :)

~ ~ * edit * Thanks
ellie172 I have found the necessary information on this page: http://www.ratschlag24.com/index.php/wie-man- one-standard page-formatted

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A novel a week.

I hope that's okay - it has to write after all, what to do:)

A friend at my university, in fact, a computer scientist, two times in less than a week 60,000 words produced in novels - with the help of a few undergraduates. There's the story here on the university website to read, but in English. In any case, interesting ... or threatening?

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How many pages for a Book?

Yesterday I, several Detours on the homepage of cassandra clare come (some perhaps known as the author of the Draco trilogy), which is in accordance with their fandom internal successes but also an accomplished writer for *- YA books.
On her site she has a great page of tips and tricks for writing . Particularly interesting I found the article by Colleen Lindsay on the length of books .
If some of you do not want to struggle through the article, I translate here the most important times. :)

First, a book should always be measured in words, not in pages. I can fill it with just over 2000 words over 200 A4 pages, as I put the gap to two lines and the font from Arial to 70.
But now to the point: Something

that I see often in queries are Word Counts also go beyond 100k. Often a manuscript exceeds this significant to a lot: I've seen Word Counts of 140k, 160k and an author has actually told me that he has written a YA manuscript, which was 188k long.

I usually go beyond this door stop politely, but lately I've been trying to take my time to the potential authors to demonstrate that their Books are just too long and propose a feasible length in front of them, depending on the genre that they write.

Somewhere out there has become a myth - especially among fantasy writers - that a higher word count is better. Authors see heavy and fat fantasy stories on the shelf and think you just have to write such a thick book to be released. Sometimes an author writes a long book simply because it is not a very good writer yet. Good writers learn how to shorten a manuscript to the most important and most indispensable elements, the Word Count fat cut away, the so-features many authors beginning to end. And the fact is, most of these "serious and fat fantasy "books that you see on the shelves, have really only one word count of about 100k to 120k.



[...] There was a time, ten years or so, more than the standard Word Counts .. were not the cases like everything goes through the books industry trends, but now wind their assistants to adult novels - even editors of monumental fantasy - a bit when they manuscripts are submitted that are longer than 110k

[.. ..]

And keep in mind that there are always Exception to the rule, but a good rule of thumb would be this:

• YA Fiction = Can be anything from about 50k to 80k , sometimes - but rarely - more than 90k


• ** Urban Fantasy / Paranormal Romance = Normally between the 80k to 100k mark, and some urban fantasy writers (I think Kelley Armstrong could be one of them) range even higher Word Counts one


• mystery and crime novels = *** While Cozys tend to be shorter than the average (between 60k and 70k), most books fall into this category between 80k and 100k about


• Mainstream Fiction = Depends on the type of literature, it can cause vary: Chick lit is somewhere between 80k and 100k ; Literary Fiction **** can have up to 120k , but recently there is a trend towards more efficient, shorter and more elegant Literary books, find Thriller also somewhere around 90k to 100k ; Historical novels can be more up to 140k or (and again: this is only a rough guide - there is always Exception to the rule). And everything is under 50k usually regarded as a novel, what something is to see the agents and editors do not, unless the publisher has a short story collection commissioned. (Agent Kristin Nelson has a good post about authors who ask for manuscripts that are too short)


• Science Fiction and Fantasy = Here is that with which most authors seem to have problems. Most of the editors of major SF / F publishers with whom I have recently spoken, do books, the higher into the end of the adult literature fall (so), some of them have told me that 100k the ideal manuscript length for good space opera or fantasy is, really for a späktakuläres monumental fantasy book, they think, that 120k/130k rich. Despite the length, they expect they can get the author to it before Publication to cut even further. (By the way, readers will often make Exception to the rule for sequels. Take the knowledge that the number of pages in JK Rowling's "Harry Potter" series and George RR Martin's "Song of Ice and Fire" series is always higher.) But even authors since years will be published and should know better, are usually submitted manuscripts that exceed the requested length of the publisher to 30k to 50k, which inevitably means more work for the authors, because retreat publisher is not - if a contract requires a book that long-100k and you submit one that is 130k long, you have to expect again to sit down and find a way 30k separate from the baby away before the manuscript is accepted. [...] If an agent or an editor finds a truly outstanding book that extends into 200k (yes, that happens!), Can it be that it is divided into two books make the life easier for everyone.

Finally, they are also advised that it is the Word Count on the safe side, if you submit a manuscript as an aspiring writer and an editor or agent wants to move to his side.


These figures come from 2008 and from America, but I think they will have to be guidelines (for Germany) does not change great.
I hope I could at least help one / one of you. :)

* YA = Young Adult
** Urban Fantasy = special form of the Contemporary = Fantasy, where the "real" action within the city takes place
*** Cozys downplayed cozies, a subgenre in of detective novels, where sex and violence or be treated humorously
**** Literary Fiction = focus (as opposed to commercial mainstream literature) to more psychological depth, character and style

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Welcome back, dear reader. At the end of the bad reviews, there is now a double feature, chapter five and six at a price! Access!

Part I Part III
Part II ; Part IV


title of the story: tears of war

Authors: KyraKaiba and Haruki_Zorro

fandom: Inu-Yasha, One Piece, Yu-Gi-Oh!

The non-existing plot: flagship Sue Mayumi tried for obscure reasons, turn off the dictator Bruce Yutaka Ishimoto, of her friend, Sue Geek Ayaka imprisons. But she gets help from Lorenor Zorro, Inu-Yasha and Seto Kaiba, but it does not Suetypisch. Stu! Tatsuja may well happen again. The almost non-existent plot is only for matchmaking of the characters.

The anti-quality of the characters: Mayumi is a SuperSue, Zorro, a self-pitying crybaby, an Emo Seto, Inu-Yasha the beat of all Sidekick, Ayaka Sue a brand Nerd Yutaka Tatsuja ridiculous and unnecessary.

positive and negative:
+ grammar and spelling mostly very good
+ hardly synonyms for the protagonists
+ it attempts to explain the plot
- but this completely fails
- Sue is still having to endure than usual
- all characters are only seen yet on the name


Chapter 5: (. run of good taste was found in the cellars of the treehouse, investigation) The body

Cut: We will plagued with other teenage daily soap dramas of the protagonists: as Mayumi is suddenly very thick with Inu-Yasha, Zorro is raging with jealousy, Kaiba is unnerved, however, because no one loved him and devoted himself so completely to his notebook , which is made to him by Mayumi dispute. In this incredibly exciting conflict engages Zorro, and Mayumi türenknallend leaves the tree house. Womanizer! Seto reiterated that women are only good for the bed, and Zorro agrees. At night, surprised the hormone-ridden by a young armed with a laser gun assassin, the Sue-for-the-rescue with an arrow done, but her eyes appear it "unfathomable empty" ...

"YI", las Kaiba from the jacket of the man from "Mayumi, you know what that means?"
"Yutaka Ishimoto" (How to predict the kind and that Bruce Yutaka all its lackeys extra labeled) whispered, this almost inaudible, and then louder. "We need to get out of here, NOW!
Inu-Yasha, you and you have to Kaiba the east! Kaiba is the way through, no longer under the trees than we need others, (since he a) is not Tarzan and b) is likely to be high-fashion jacket constantly caught in some branches) so go before time "

Cut!: Sue sends out Inu and Setolein Zorro and asks to help her bury the corpse. Is there a more romantic atmosphere for a date?

"Zorro
...."" It's all right Mayumi, you do not come along. You just for the first time in your life someone killed (and he knows where ...?) , you feel ! You safe terrible " (Empathie! Zorro I also wonder how he will know the feeling, for he himself has never killed anyone - apart from Ryuma, but does not count that was finally dead from the start)
Then something happened that neither of the two had ever expected, Mayumi certainly not, but it was to hinbeugte to Zorro and kissed him fleetingly . (Yes, the Sue plays only the Emo! Sue to softie! Zorro tow.) "Watch yourself!"
with a whispered, they disappeared into the trees and was never seen again took Kaiba and Inu-Yasha soon (What a remarkable achievement, considering that the two are in front of an estimated two minutes first started walking.).

Cut: Zorro's last remaining brain cell is overloaded with the illogical logic of Sue.

thoughts about thoughts, which are piled up in his head to a shambles ( pictures say more than 1000 words ) and all because of a girl. No, it was Zorro, the aspiring sword fighter's never in his life (because so far had his crew made sure that he was not versuet) .

*
"Nett was here ...", it almost enthusiastic about Kaiba, when he and Inu-Yasha and Mayumis Ayakas entered house (while the sentence under the load of four to one after the other disturbing hnte,) he saw and all the technology that one immediately stabbed in the eye. (It this is the so-called AEAAAS, the anti-intruder-eye-Cutters-defense system.) "Can you now, like computers and bypass all this stuff, Mayumi" It seems
here yes But anyone thinking may be not so bad (even if it's not, unfortunately, I am) !, he thought approvingly (and with watery eyes in pain, so a device should also specify times).
"This is not mine ..." she stammered. Tears glistened in her eyes. ("I did confess, I stole it all!" But please tell the GEZ none of this! ")
If I had to think alike, something that a woman can not bring about (I bet 1ooo rubber dots on the pairing Ayaka / Seto) , he thought, glancing at the many new things that are scattered throughout the house. (Hui. time change. Unfortunately, women actually induced.)
"And? Whose is it? "Asked Kaiba it disinterested. (If it's not interested, why the hell with it then asks at all?)
"THAT'S YOU TO nothingness !!!", screamed Mayumi applied to him in the face. Then she ran to the door. (Did they ask the guys do not really help in saving Plo Ayakas ot ~?)

Cut: The Sue goes looking for Zorro. Inu-Yasha takes while the house under the microscope.

As he tampons, which he had naturally found in the bathroom trash can , (which incidentally would explain the pesky mood swings of Sue) began under the tap keep (Whaaaat Well ... at least he did not try to eat them: X) , Kaiba stopped completely unnerved him. (And he does weil. ..?)
Why, indeed unnerved? (Perhaps due to the fact of how this gag was listless and how humiliating his role in it? Or because he was stuck at all in this BF?)
Well, some silly but in fact all PCs backed up in this house, with password ... and in such a refined, that even he with the many technical tricks that he mastered it on the fly could not crack-frustrating! (1ooo.ooo rubber points out that the password is either "cappuccino", "synapses murder" or "celestial bed" is.)
Then were there now unnerved Kaiba, a suspicious Inu-Yasha, (a softened if ,) a troubled Mayumi and of course a completely disoriented Zorro (what else? be), who was hopelessly lost in the woods.
perfect criteria, the world and of course to save Ayaka (After all, the Geek Sue important than the planet, is so clear!). - of course, quite apart from the fact that (we still do not to know What exactly they will actually be saved, what do the so Sue and what they need for heroes of medieval, pirate era and modern times young again * headdesk * and) since her abduction three weeks have passed were. Ishimoto had her in this time can do to buy something else (such as your notebook, discuss with her about makeup and hair trends and marry her) . Of course, the heroes had no idea of it yet (, nor the fact that they were once again stalked by an authorial narrator).
What needs to change quickly, thought lost Mayumi . (Oh, suddenly you want to tell you that what is going on? That was fast.)

When they finally tracked down Zorro well after midnight in the forest, they did not speak with him. (And as fast as she has changed her mind and again.)
She had been showing clear enough, what she felt now he had to take the next step (and panting down with a rose between her teeth before her kneel and worship them) ... if the at all for him was (because otherwise it would mean they grin with the Wado Ichi Monji mow down between the teeth and then go his way) ...
Sadly she lowered her gaze even further (which is why they saw the road directly in front of him and not cracked full swing against) and trudged sullenly (with a huge bump on the forehead) advance towards City.
you regret it again, thought Zorro, I can still see (because it is bold in its blue-purple now underway forehead) ... my face, they repented IT! And I thought ...
Zorro could not think over, (as he had for such a consideration already taken more than an hour, it was now time for the slow variety) he stood in front of you it strange -style house, Mayumis house. (How strange must look for a house to someone who is sprung from Oda's fantasy to shock yet?)

Cut: Kaiba wants answers, but Sue will prefer a shower (we finally have Priorities), it is then but still deign to bring us closer to the plot - or not, because ... CLIFF HANGER!



So, mid-term, short coffee break for you. As a tea drinker I use it sometimes makes sense to you on the now activated Journal of alexis_hiemis to point to the significant title Alexis Laberecke - From a Sue, who set out to be a character . The us all well-known BF-selling author Hunter processed here their traumas in a most interesting essays.

goes And on to Chapter 6, the words as "news" - lets hope so.


Chapter 6: News

In the castle of the dictator: (Guuuh. Doppelheaddesk fuera) the stupid location information and b) the ridiculously drawn-out would-be cliffhanger).
"Ayaka, Liiiiiiiiebes"
Like almost every morning stepped Yutaka Ishimoto greasy grinning the stuffy room. Despite efforts Ayakas were the leather sofas still there (Um - what did you just on leather sofas so completely seriously now: what you have on leather sofas?)

Cut: Sue-Gezicke

What is he doing now again for a crazy game, she wondered secretly (you will held captive for three weeks in a square room of a model-dictator, who you meet virtually any need, including notebook and asking the seriously Only now, what this is all about?) . Actually he was her nothing, after all, he was the one who was dependent on her (Because they had used common nails with making the last Tuesday of acetone-containing nail polish remover. Did he know how you could save the nails he needs it that is alive. Muhahaha!)
Without them he would never legally the power can get! (he has got her already! In addition, it is likely for him as a dictator but not be too difficult to arrange a marriage on paper!)
So why was he so sure she swayed to can? (he had heard some of Palmolive and repaired his nails again?)
Something was not there. (I think so since the beginning of the FF.)
being sneaky grin confirmed their suspicions.
(He did so as she saw the advertisement. A new plan. Buy!) Spent Ayaka had barely finished that thought (What the EGTL in this BF. Permanently stacked with their thoughts? Track, to end .. . Technically, these are namely only a short electrical impulse ...) Ishimoto already talked to them again:
"So quiet at once? Has it become clear about that I do not need you? (Ick have gemackt nämlick Weckselkurs one!) "
Ayaka tried to show no reaction and just browse through it (she saw it but incredibly stupid from * drool *) - she did not succeed completely. Her eyebrows twitched up (Well I for one have my facial muscles under control so far that I do not cringe constantly. Even if this trash is a tough test here.)
This can not possibly be. The other countries would never accept him, (if he bathed his hands in soap every night,) she thought he must be bluffing.
"What dream you at night? "she replied tartly. (Coincidentally, nightmares of green, glibbrigen jelly lumps? ")
" always just you, my angel! (And believe me, it's just as bad I know it.) "

Cut: More Sue-Gezicke messed up and thought forms.

"Does that mean, then, I am the first woman with a taste that you meet" with these negative words came Ayaka approached one of the large window. (Spring! Spring! Spring!)
The Anblik earth was much nicer!
She looked down at a beautiful garden of gigantic proportions. (Komisch. It Was not even in the penultimate chapter that the balcony with geranium boxes is set to full?)
In selecting the flowers had been spared nothing, even at first glance stood out some exotics. (I repeat! Geraniums)
liked it the best large shrub with beautiful blue roses in front of her window (cliche, you again have to do secure a lot in this BF, so I will! keep you. See you there!).

"A beautiful garden, is not it?" He asked, suddenly close to her.
Ayaka was taken aback ... where was the trail of slime that dripped from otherwise generally Ishimotos words? (sorry, but I've wiped up, so readers do not slip on it and push his head.)
"And the roses I planted extra for you, my sweet darling! (adjust to your new class color turquoise bedding, my Liiiiiiebes!) "
Oh! Since she was again. (sorry, but this Mucus is so terribly stubborn! * Scrubs * ) you his arm, pushed to the side, he had tried to place it and sat on one of the sofas. She looked coldly at him. (Oh, since we got him back: the freezing death of Sue-view)
"not sufficient for this farce you slow? (I am already.) We both know how you really are, so listen to me constantly zuzutexten with this garbage! Come finally to the point! "
" Everything after your will, my darling. "
She blinked at him angrily. (And the death of Sue-wink!)
"So really Ayaka. Are you so blind, or are you just pretending? Do you really the death of your father was the only one that could hurt thee? Think about it (and read me a list with the appropriate persons, darling) "
with his toothpaste smile, he left the room (as usual in the model cross-step with Hüftgewackel).
"psychopath!"
Ayaka was deathly pale.

*

Already it bubbled out of Kaiba (because we know him already from the Canon as unstoppable chatterbox) :
"Wiesindwirhierhergekommenwerbistduwirklichwaswirdhiergespieltwerhatdichbeauftragtunszuentführenwersind

deineKomplizenwasistdasüberhauptfüreinescheißbekackteWeltundwemzumTeufelgehörtdiese madness computer collection?" (Let it out, Seto scream your anger channeling small! ! your anger by vernacular Also you forgot to mention that you hate pink)
The young CEO took a breath and was about to speak - rather shouting - start, when he was suspended by Zorro was:
"May I ask something? (That is, if your Majesty Sue the excess permits.) "
" Yes, Zorro ... (an exception would I lend you my inferior creature Sueperfektes ear) , "said Mayumi, who was a torrent of words Kaibas more than annoyed.
"Where is the toilet?" (... for that I can not find a comment ...) Inu-Yasha
"toilet, which is the toilet?" To hear, (as it absolute rubbish was, as it both in the Middle Ages thud-and in Kagome given age Wasserspülungsklos had) showed Mayumi Zorro the way (as a simple "third door down the passage on the left" was not sufficient to Zorro FF-sense orientation) and had is really Back to return ; cknehmen not to pounce on him. Kaiba stared aghast behind the two. "You want drückn up just before my questions," he hissed then (, still hoarse from shouting,) and tried to stay calm.

Cut: More Sue-Gezicke.

"I thought you have to go to the bathroom?" Mayumi replied and carried him with a kick in the ass right into the bathroom (and through the closed door through) . With the words "Peace at last," she slammed the door behind him. But Kaiba they seemed to have heard: "Move your ass to come here! (sounds a hundred percent to Seto Kaiba.) I want a beer finally got my answers! (That's actually doing here. Eureka!) "
Before Mayumi could have started to say something, her ring is lit red (which here as the practical first is mentioned once. He's probably just grown out from the skin of Sue or so.).
"What the heck is going on? The signal to the world? (Or the introduction of self-destruction of the FF?) "asked Kaiba mocking hopeful.
Since a hologram appeared above the ring.
"Tatsuja", Mayumi gasped breathlessly. "Is there anything new?"
"What is that because a dude?" Asked Zorro, (which is straight from the bathroom back into the living room beamed had) he was obviously jealous.
The Holo-Tatsuja could be like this not to be impressed (eventually this was heavily armed, scary fighters for the last three weeks in he hands of Sue, ergo her humble servant). "You must come immediately to headquarters! We have important information! (Which I can tell you, of course, not here, because the line is monitored, but of course I can tell you in this way to send you the secret address.) "
" headquarters, how professional! " ,, Kaiba said ironically. (I have a new co-hunter oO)
The hologram turned on the ring and fix (Member) the three men (as a non-pirouette when dizzy when a fixed point fixed).
"The want to bring you not really?", It sounded almost accusatory from the hologram. ("The view does not yet even housebroken!")
"No," said Mayumi seconds with a quick glance at Zorro, (in fact she had concerns with him, because although it announced had to go to the bathroom, but she had never heard the toilet flush ...) "I would prefer it if we are disturbed,"
"Oho!" came it from the dirty grinning CEO. (No, seriously! Pan, the authors here just yourself)
Holo-Tatsuja shrugged his shoulders a little confused (Here's all so vague: "confused", "almost accusingly," " almost nice "- you decide, folks)..
"But right up on you, kid! There are now many bots (XD! Beware of web crawlers! You will get all of you and spamming!) on the move! "
Now Zorro had heard enough and disappeared inside hurt and upset, (Emo! Zorro) and yet outwardly unconcerned as ever (Wannabe-IC! Zorro) , without saying another word, in one of the bedrooms. (Actually, he had willed to the bathroom, but had no idea where it was again.)

Cut: Sue on breaks, without orders to the guys before, to stay in the house.

* Mayumi
now ran along the streets and looked at again and again rushed. She could not believe that in such a primitive trap was tapped. (Ahm. .. I do not know where this comes from selling, which he is or why the timeline has been broken here so cruel. But because the logic in that BF does not exist anyway, forget it.)

Driven by her curiosity Mayumi hurried toward the headquarters of the rebels. (nice that it is their curiosity that drives them, and not the need the world or save the Geek! Sue.) not really pays attention to their surroundings. (because as already stated in Chapter 1 may not Sue scary look good, follow their thoughts and running at the same time.)
was with almost all her thoughts she with her friend. (The remaining 45% of them thought of freshly brewed cappuccino.) they earnestly hoped that she was well and Tatsuja had found out something.
was suddenly they are surprised. Where was she ended up here? (In the innermost circle of hell, I hope?)
"Fuck ...", it escaped her. (Vulgär! Sue)
Mayumi it could (namely their incredible stupidity) not believe themselves. She had been so absorbed in thought that she had not noticed where she was executed run (This is so stupid! If you want to go somewhere urgently, such as in a super-secret headquarters of the world to save, you can simply not be so stupid to get lost on the way to then complete!) . Any clue where they helped in searching, they looked at the surrounding buildings and the surrounding streets. Nothing seemed to her really familiar. In this neighborhood they had never been (because here there was neither trendy boutiques or a Starbucks) .

Cut: Because Sue is sinking steadily in mind, but unfortunately not to drown, she is unarmed and more as she hears still rattling dustbin lid, she gets it with fear. In an alley they found a wounded man, the Samaritan! Sue doctored. However, this was a totally elaborate trap, and Sue now has to run away from a "bot". This raises our heroes to save them, are angezickt Suetypisch for now. Inu-Yasha destroyed after all the "bots" will be Thanks to Sue from the beaten while Seto can go with a memory stick of the bots. Sue White suddenly back exactly where it is, and leads the others to headquarters.


"I thought you wanted to come alone?" Was the first thing she heard from Tatsuja when they entered the small cave in the catacombs (Oh, hello cliche! I knew we would meet us here again!)
Mayumi waved repellent by hand.
"Oh, that? They're like barnacles, there is nothing to be done. Note they did not! " (In the paragraph before that they are still considered the" trade secret weapon ", now they are back to Sue-worshipers been degraded ...)
"Exactly, just do it as Mayumi." Zorro said, grinning. ( It is therefore up to kiss first, then hit again and anzicken up constantly? Masochists! Zorro!) "She does not notice us even as our beloved Kaiba was so stupid to knock over a garbage can . AND ALSO DIRECTLY BEHIND YOU! (AND I THOUGHT IT WOULD BE a fighter! SUE! AND HOW do you get REALLY THE CAPSLOCK OUT AGAIN?) "
" That was intentional, "said Kaiba, as so often on his own self-confident. ("This is namely an additional hard Gag of the authors, that was not my fault!) But before he could explain this jay, fell Tatsuja him short.
"We have to do now really more important than us to talk about some garbage cans." He said annoyed. (Yes, we know that only good in the sixth chapter still do not know what's so goddamn important!)
It was the kind of dislike him!
He turned to Mayumi.
The spies have returned. It is not much, but at least we now know where Ayaka at the moment is. " (Wow, and for that you only needed three whole weeks! If you consider that all the lackeys Yutakas are labeled engraviert even be Skyomobil his initials, it must be incredibly hard to be lock detect.)
Mayumi opened his eyes wide open, they did not dare to interrupt him.
Someone else but it did: "Ayaka, wre or what is this?" Asked Inu-Yasha curious. ("what" does it very well.)
Mayumi rolled his eyes and heaved a long sigh. (as Sue she was a shame, such a banal to explain the facts.) Tatsuja Then at last began to tell. (wow! In the sixth chapter, we finally learn what all the junk here!)
"Ishimoto has been kidnapped her and brought her to her castle. He wants to get her to marry him. "It was obviously difficult to express in these words. "This was his legitimate rule and its unlimited possibilities." (To say it took me 15 seconds. So this time may indeed be impossible Sue branch off from making coffee, just about this whole post, the able to explain!)
"options? What do you mean? He can not now do everything that it is the point? "interjected Mayumi. (Mayumi? So my lady I can-and-white all-comes-and-pray-I-zero bearing on himself, but does so as if she were the last hope of the world. Well then good night.)
"Think about it," began Tatsuja, "the alliance between the continents meet together soon. They would lock up eien dictator like him, or even kill (because he abused commas. However, the alliance meets only every 1ooo Years, have in the meantime people are suffering just commas) . With Ayaka as a wife by his side, it would appear that simply had a seizure of power took place after the wedding. From her to him (because the Geek! Sue and her father were of course cuddle dictators who have done the best for their people, such as free coffee for all, or the national flag in Tü ; turquoise new design ) . Thus, it would all doors to the alliance members are open and he could try it for yourself to win, spionieren, intrigieren, oder zu nach härteren Mitteln greifen, um seinem Ziel näher zu kommen. Was das ist, solltest du eigentlich wissen. (Schön, dass es uns aber nicht mitgeteilt wird. Wir sind ja bloß die Leserschaft.) "

Cut: Sue weiß nicht mehr weiter. Kaiba macht den revolutionären Vorschlag, einfach die Hochzeit zu verhindern. Das passt aber Stu!Tatsuja nciht, da er die Angebetete natürlich selbst retten will.

Tja, und damit endet die FF. Die Autorinnen scheinen sich untereinander zerstritten zu haben oder so. Und so werden wir nun nie erfahren, worum zur Hölle it actually gin all the time g what the title should whether Sue and Zorro is still going to get you, and if the Geek! will succeed Sue, to soften Setos heart. Tragic.
I hope at least you still have a few functioning brain cells left.
* can * because a lot of cappuccino

Bandana Hd Kates Playground

synapses murder or what can cause Suez and cappuccinos II


More coffee. More Sueigkeit. More retching. Here, exclusive to Verreiss_mich!

Part I (according to old rules in my lj) here , Part II here and Part III here .

title well thought exciting story: tears of war (was deleted in fanfiktion.de)

Authors: KyraKaiba (formerly phoenix_of_light) & Haruki_Zorro

The maltreated fandom: One Piece, Yu-Gi-Oh! and Inu-Yasha

The hare-brained plot: In a there Zukunfstwelt a very evil dictator, the Mary Sue Mayumi wants to conquer using Inu-Yasha from the Middle Ages, Lorenor Zorro from the pirate era and Seto Kaiba from the young modern times. The (nonexistent) story line is just a flimsy excuse to Zorro to marry off with Sue.

The anti-quality of the characters: Mayumi is the perfect Mary Sue, who knows everything can, and constantly herumzickt and is still adored by all. Zorro has lost brain and pride is a self-pitying crybaby, Seto suffers from mood swings like a thirteen-year-old girl and Inu-Yasha must occur only as a naive nurse-side kick. Geek! Ayaka, Bruce! Ishimoto and Stu us remain in this chapter, after all saves.

Positives & Negatives: + grammar and spelling mostly very good
+ hardly synonyms for the main characters
+ Seto and Inu-Yasha are also times to
word - but it just talk nonsense
- still no proper thought form
- the characters are consistently OOC
- the plot is moved not a bit ahead



Chapter 4: Little Love Story?

The chapter begins with the blackmail of the authors, not three continue to write comments - shame on those who wrote it!

were really hard days for the boys and especially for Mayumi (because infected the aftermath of her sex change even in the bones) . Her fever rose to such an extreme that all three (all three of fever or what is? A subspecies of the Bieber? Well, what covers are fine, not only for Sue-poster beds!) have to fear before her em survival had. In the rare moments when the intense pain they were awake (the pain they can wake up? Since it is her body but powerful what's wrong ...) were the only thing she saw Zorro's eyes, even if they perceived around them absolutely nothing (because she was dizzy from sheer commas). Later was her only reminder of those days (the terrible pain, they could wake up and) the sight of those same eyes (save the genitive!) . Zorro sat day and night on her bed and slept even less than Kaiba ahm (- only once for the record, Zorro, the Canon almost just asleep or struggling / to take coaching, not sleeping, because he must take care of the sick Sue. Is' clear.) , but with the only difference is that this is still in front of his laptop was (lag? But then crumpled but the coat!) than once every three days he was on the thing and came (in a subordinate clause prior to the fandom Yu-Gi-Oh! and related manner collectors come inside were justified, and) slept through 24 hours. Much movement, he also got nciht as it walked, if any, to the coffee machine (no cappuccino machine?) or refrigerator. Inu-Yasha, however (was even less than before and Kaiba) only slept from morning to noon controlled, then, whether the tree house from below still invisible, was (if necessary nor was an additional layer Superbeiallemwetterhaltendergeruchsneutralerunsichtbarkeitslack ™, a patent, Monsanto to Ayaka,) and the nights are held on watch on Mayumis apple tree ( - in short, he was the only one who did something sensible)..

One night strange noises awakened by Kaiba (hm - the voices in his head?).

The following passage is simply a figurehead to ICness - let it work for you:
"Mayumi, ... Please (!) ... Please wake up ...", whispered (!) Zorro over and over again, interrupted by sobs (!!!) in the turquoise blue (no comment) linens.
Did the authors get the manga / anime ever to the face? So I doubt it very slowly ...

Kaiba turned his back to him and was not note that he has everything mitbekam (false, Seto! You should go and comfort him!). In his eyes flashed something unusual: What was that? About Grief ... and pain? (Or tears of laughter because of this sentimental imbecility?) What was only with him? (why he was suddenly in the fourth chapter, a part attributed?) envied him why he (actually a question of if it meant only having to idolize daft Love intrests and howl ) ? Love at first sight, to so what he already thought long not he had wasted not even a thought, there was no such thing. That was nonsense! A real relationship with a girl? (For until now limited its us "Babe hOttEzT dUElmaStA eVA !!!!" or" by the manga extensively documented experience with the fair sex only to online chats with girls with evocative names like Nick cuteBlackMagicianGirl) Haha, he thought bitterly that never worked!

Cut: Emo Seto thinks ahead to the mass of failed relationships after that led him to conclude that women are only good for conquest and exploitation, and on the (May would beat you up for that.) death of his brother, rolls together and crying thinks herself to sleep. By Zorro's outburst Sleeping Beauty wakes up too! Sue again. Sorry.

"Zorro!" She murmured, and promptly fell asleep again (this time hopefully for good).
"No problem, I like you nursed!" Inu-Yasha's only comment was, when he came in from his night watch the tree house and entered Mayumis heard the first word after three weeks of illness before he disappeared in the FF in the Necessary-Siedekick-sinking. Kaiba, during their awakening and his coffee (where else?) (a) brackets in the text are stupid and testify no way of style. b) Your running joke is so ready, flat and listless as anything. And c) Since when is EGTL Seto. Coffee fanatics?) was nodded only clamped and then back behind his new notebook that he (though) already (the last three weeks had, but not until now) in his (cold and broken ) heart closed seemed to have.

Cut: A little plot, you may not believe it! Kaiba does not trust Mayumi and speaks Inu-Yasha depends - on the tree house veranda in a rocking chair sitting.

"Stay Loose Bark. I wish you only once to ask what you think of the chick! " (Seto, the cool slang gangster, as we know and love it.)
"chick? What is a chick? "Came out of the tree ask (because Inu-Yasha was now completely united with him). (Check one more tortured ARGH! English grammar ... If you can not, please let be. Or at leo.)
"Oh, I forgot, you're son Wonderland people, can so do not even know what I mean! What did you say again are you? A demon? Sorry, I meant, of course, half-demon (which brings me back to the question of why Inu-Yasha is not simply a portal in his time opening - wait, that would be logical! Mea culpa.) , we do not want you even do better than you are! (rightly so. Always nice to slap on the only ones who can help you right now.) "
" Be careful what you say, SETO-CHAN! (Hooray, you can use Japanese suffixes, brave Fangirls * pat * What is the love Inu-Yasha but the trigger!) "
flattened After a short silence (because he was still completely from this Scharfzü , a function,) to Kaiba announced yet again to speak: "I just wanted to ask what you think of this" Shit, what was her name again? (Gangster! Seto strikes back! Includes new form of thought: and memory loss.) "ääääh Mayumi think?"
"She seems to be a good fighter Sue one to be. After all, she has defeated Zorro. "Said the half-demon.
"So I'm now so not meant !!!", pimped him Kaiba (Seto Bitchy! strikes back!) .
"Oh, you think that they knew Zorro's name? "asked Inu-Yasha.
"Aha, you're one of the very rapid species. The fact is that she apparently knows U.S., without which we know about them. "Kaiba mused aloud.
"I think you do you too much, Kaiba, it's quite nice!" Said Inu-Yasha naive back (as he had done so never in my life negative experiences with women).
"I give up, like where you really lost everything," said Kaiba resigned and ended the conversation, (which he was so polite had begun) purely went by, made coffee and get back behind the laptop jammed (And he can not find out anything about their current situation?) .

Cut: The Sue lives, unfortunately, still is recovering while drinking cappuccino (I am beginning to think they get paid a commission of Nescafé) on the porch. Thank you it does not, of course, she's a Sue. When you walk in the woods starts playing child! Zorro another scavenger hunt.

you did it and was amazed ncith bad: a pirate who could handle a bow and arrow almost as good as them? (What are you talking about? He has missed you, he is a lousy shooter!)
He must have practiced day and night ... (because he sleeps so not known, but trained at night all the time because it is his goal, the world's best swordsman to be Archer)
(...)
was soon clear to her where to lead the young swordsman she wanted: To the lake, in the apple trees, which they had planted themselves and Ayaka Vorrausgesetzt (they do not have these trees planted as infants, can Accordingly, they are still not very large.). The tears were her again in the eyes, (ah, crybabies! Sue!) so they Zorro first noticed when she stood in front of him stepped on him.
you did not believe it, but this bag was actually eingepennt! (I do not believe it: A radio IC Hurrah!)
NA WAIT 's thought (it's Welch appropriate pronoun for a disgusting Sue: D)! and was already climbing up the nearest tree (which she herself had planted several years ago. Right. Poor tree.) .
"WooMe" Zorro flew a fat apple at his head. At first he did not know what was going on around him, but he realized very quickly, "Hey Mayumi, I'm full of suffering! (That's it for now ... back to the IC) Please come out of the trees! I mean it seriously ", he called up, without really knowing exactly where she was (As the boy has survived because of these reflexes as a swordsman so long?) . After several minutes he sat in despair on the floor.
"WHY WOMEN NEED TO DEVIL ALWAYS BE SO damn complicated?" (CAPSLOCK FTW !!!!!!!)
"Whoosh" and flew it to the next apple to the head, followed immediately by Mayumi (She throws him not to his neck, but to the head. Interesting tactic!) , which landed next to him .
"Ouch!" He shouted (clear Jah. Zorro has always been a Zimperlieschen. What are five liters of blood loss from an apple (and Sue) flying against a head?) .
not "scream here so rum. You make the poor birds have fear (Do not worry, that have been squashed because of you). In addition, we ARE NOT kompliziert, IHR Männer MACHT uns kompliziert!!!" (Emanzen!Sue!) , meckerte sie ihn an.
"Is ja schon gut, du Zicke, darf man als Mann nicht mal seine Ruhe haben? (Lo~ogik? Wo bist du?! Lass mich hier nicht allein zurück!) ", motzte er zurück.

Cut: Mayumi meint, Zorro wäre kein Mann, sondern höchstens ein "Jüngelchen". Der erwidert innovativ, dass sie keine Frau wäre. Mayumi haut ab und heult rum, weil Zorro sie nicht mag. Inu-Yasha ist ihr gefolgt, und Kleinkind!Sue will Fangen spielen.


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