Sunday, May 30, 2010

Does Strep Throat Cause You To Be Tired

The legend that the world anew wrote


I found an official writing contest, where you can submit novels from a length of 40 pages. Since I to the deadline can not be done with my book, it can also allow fantasy, I thought I try to use a story I wrote 10 years ago. So I come finally to revise it to me, what I decide for years.

The problem is that I myself have never really read fantasy. I have (10 years ago) only once a "getaway" in the field arose placed in the this story. As the story just the second has been in my life, it is in language and expression are a little weak on the chest, I will do now.

I post here is my preface and the prologue and I would appreciate any criticism and opinions on your part a lot. Only to find out times, as they go down too and if it no longer acts as if a 16 year old thought her unworthy salad in German on paper. Urgent help, I could also use the commas. This has always distributed as at with a shotgun because I found the art of commas not dominant ^ ^ " Cough and I jump like a rabbit by the time * * but I think that would be even ...^^"

Oh and can I maybe a day, "Poster: Inge McMax" have? Would be super sweet, thank you!

preface

An angel is born as a human being.

completely naked and without wings.

Only when he comes of age and for the first time he gets his wings stretched the power of heaven and becomes higher to a Beings as human beings.

But the wings are like a radar. Who develops once the eye of the Creator can not escape.

Prolog

Once created, the Lord Angels and men. All were from the male gender, revered him and had sworn eternal loyalty. Out of nowhere, but suddenly appeared a female human child. No one knew where it came from, not one time the Lord himself could explain. Initially suspected of the devil, but he protested his innocence and claimed he had nothing to do. After some hesitation, God let the child be large and even found pleasure in the shape of the woman. Their charm. Their beauty and their diversity. But it was so different from men. So he created other women. Not only among humans but also among the angels.

grew One day, however, the interest in the opposite sex and not the Lord, but the mistress was in the first place. Men swore eternal loyalty to the women and vice versa.

Love was born.

The Lord, however, was furious and the woman was blamed on Betrayal. Only by their appearance and their charm it come to this. She had brought evil into the sky. Angels and men to sin. The sin to turn away from the Lord. People were not care. They were nothing more than a pastime, which he gladly watched. The quarrels between men to women were for him a welcome change. But the Angels, he considered his superb work, his masterpiece of creation, he could not forgive. The highest and most powerful angel he had ever created, but that did little. On the contrary, this was the love make a living being worth living.

In protest and rebellion against the Lord, he gave birth, the sex was without a child. A daughter.

you only a few days old when the Creator in his anger, decided to all female angel in crystal block. They banish from memory and the hearts of men and thus restore order in the sky. In a moment of carelessness, the Lord took his highest angels caught as the first. Because this can only as the Creator had all the power and would apply themselves well against the Lord and stop him. The angel cried out in anger: "You Women can not drive out of the sky! "

" I can! And I'll start with your daughter, "scoffed the man in the madness. Fearing for his daughter and the continued existence of heaven, gained the highest angels of its energy.

"You will never get it! I will never leave you! "He cried to the Creator even before it releases its energy.

But whatever he intends also had seemed to fail. The sky was lit but for a brief moment in glaring light, but then it went out empty-handed and the mighty angels fell because of the high energy loss in an eternal sleep.

Now no one could oppose the Lord and he was relentlessly chasing women on the angels, and shut her in the perpetual crystal.

He chased them all, until he finished the last as an eternal monument in crystal and banished them to a secret place that no one knew except him. He wanted them all sent to the irrevocable death, but even if he could give them life, not take it again in his power.

And so the angels wife disappeared from the sky and the Lord was now feared as a ruthless ruler. However, a Woman, a baby, remained undetected and lost. The daughter of the archangel. She had disappeared without a trace. How swallowed by the clouds.

The Lord thought that the most powerful angels have killed her to spare her the eternal sleep in the crystal and not grant him the satisfaction. The satisfaction of something as powerful as this woman, his daughter to have.

The hunt for the women of the angel heaven was almost completely destroyed. The male tried to rebel angels to the women and the Supreme liberate and protect. But in vain. Many were slain in the fighting, killed or overthrown.

They were powerless, and to know the Angels have not disappeared completely from the sky and the world gave the Angels fought and laid down their weapons. They apologized for their disobedience to God and swore to him new and everlasting loyalty.

accepted God and forgave them. However, since time immemorial were strict rules in heaven and who is not obeyed, was punished with death. God had enough of the world in which they lived. The sky was always destroyed and people had lost their appeal. This world had lost its charm. It was time for something new. A new beginning.

And thus the Lord has created something new. A parallel world into which he moved with the remaining angels. He took the man, the memories of the sky and its inhabitants. Only in him, they should remember, as a merciful and loving Creator of this world. Then he left the world we know today. In which we live today. The world in which we count the year 2010 AD.

In the new world that had the same basic principles as our own, he created a human world with both sexes. A world that as we went through evolution and development over time, but ours is far behind.

But he never created again a female angel!

said in a celestial legend, which would cause the blood of the daughter to awaken the angel women.

The floor of the tomb, the women slept in the eternal crystal is provided with a fine branches of grooves and crevices. Similarly, the base of each crystal with this pattern would be associated to the ground.

Legend has it that when the blood of the daughter flows through the channels and feeds the base of life will be breathed her life the angels women back into the sky.

The last hope remains that the Angels. The last hope to cling to many of the secret. The hope that takes place in the hearts of some angel food, and has thus enabling survival in the sky.

A hope which is slowly dying. For it is deleted for too many millennia into the country without the daughter appeared ever!

Saturday, May 29, 2010

Aldi Replacement Toothbrushes 2009

violet_thiuri @ 2010-05-29T15: 50:00

The first stalls Leichlinger strawberries are spreading in the pedestrian zone. I could weider are of course not, and I bought two bowls * * mjam
At home I have the shells in the refrigerator first asked because I wanted the supermarket. When I then just get out, I see that I have mitgekauft a little luck.



ladybugs and strawberries is even more on a summer Picture?

Wednesday, May 26, 2010

Lindsey Dawn Mckinsey Dailymotion

Roman competition

Chicken House Germany and the FAZ-looking children and Jungendbücher.Chicken House Germany is a children's and youth book publisher that was founded by Carlsen and the British publisher Chicken House. The text of the invitation reads:

Who reads like the world around forget about. Especially children and young people have to perform this miracle. Why are authors who write exciting, by leaving the beaten path and conquer new territory literary us worth an award.

The Feuilleton of the Frankfurter Allgemeine newspaper editors and the publisher Chicken House Germany looking for such talent. We want manuscripts for children and young people by authors who dare to her first step into public.

A five-member jury, in addition to editors, critics and booksellers heard, not least the best-selling author Isabel Abedi, will decide the winning text. A publication in Chicken House Germany is the price.


Here's more info: http://www.chickenhouse.de/verlag/manuskripte/der-goldene-pick/

Monday, May 24, 2010

Templates For Boats For Dt

violet_thiuri @ 2010-05-24T14: 17:00

, are there any simple kindergarten variant are other types of folding a paper boat? Most of all I would have a Segelschiffchen .....

Thursday, May 13, 2010

Old Stove Vent In My House

casualty

title of the story: accident
Author: noda
Fandom: Bleach


The plot: Rukia is passed. Also, it is sex education in motion.
Positives: spelling is good, correct direct speech, present form is maintained consistently
Negatives: Extremely short declarative sentences, punctuation, consists only of points, points, and points again. All the characters are OOC.

extract from the poetic masterpiece: "We've got better I said too late and we had to run to school. We were already. We had only to cross another intersection. Rukia was in the middle as a vice on them. Rukia stood rooted to the spot. I've done it in the last minute it from the path of the truck to get. The idiot is not even moved aside. "

exposures which are for beginners, so we jump forward rather just head into the fray! Rukia and Ichigo, who are on their way to school bitchen, on just who was more of them in the bathroom when ...

Before she could speak her sentence to the end of a truck honking going on. Rukia is in the middle of the road. The truck driver honks further but makes no attempt to evade or zubremsen. She stands just shocked. Ichigo will make a quick decision. Runs on the street and manages at the last second and Rukia get shut out of the path of the truck.

Rukia is indeed known to be blind, stupid and has no reflections. Moreover, it is nice of Ichigo, he quickly decides to save her, and not previously questioned nor his senior staff for advice.
"Say you have them all yet. Just like on the road to run. "the man said" Hey. They shout around here is not so. You could also slow down or avoid. "Ichigo Is back just as sour as the driver. "Why should I avoid. She could watch better. This small - "Ichigo's wrist crack. He goes to the man lying on the floor with wide eyes. His cheek is adorned with a large red spot of Ichigo's fist. While he was still shocked on the floor and sits wide-eyed look at Ichigo, Rukia, he goes on to help her to her feet, takes her and his bag and leaves.

How you see are exclamation and question marks no longer necessary today. We can finally give his emotions very well nonverbal expression, as we demonstrated here Ichigo beautiful. And what ever have his wrists, it sounds unhealthy. Moreover, it's great that the truck driver sitting on can go Rukia! Artists! Truck driver!
Both decide not to go to school. Rukia's face still shows no emotion. Slowly he begins to care for them. Rukia sees her brother Byakuya just to confuse similar. Her face is emotionless. Ichigo Rukia's sister wonders how Hisana endure it with Byakuya or whether it was just as he was. "Rukia." No answer "Rukia." Still no "Hey Rukia. He-"Before he can continue to speak it collapses. Rukia before touching the ground, he catches it. "Hey Rukia, what's going on. Say something. "He tapped gently on the cheek, but no emotion.

Very nice, that Ichigo NOW until it begins to worry about them. Great is also that during the worry-be-still time, has to worry about Rukia's family upside down. And even if they go to school, why he does not then just go home instead of silly to stand around and wait for it fall over?

appeared To make matters worse on Renji. "ICHIGO! WHAT YOU DID WITH EMPLOYEES Rukia! "" Now's not so roaring around. I've done nothing. "Renji and Ichigo and Renji look at each other reaches for Zabimaru.
Um, yes, choleric! Renji falls just happen out of the sky or something. And obviously he needs all the capslock and exclamation mark for themselves, leaving the poor Ichigo no more (different is its incredibly lethargic reaction not really explained).

"Ugh" Ichigo looked at Rukia and shake gently. But she does not wake. They both decide to 4th to bring division. So you can be helped.
Fourth Division - As they be helped!
There is always a good idea to churn a potentially injured first powerfully. Shake it!

In the 4th Division is the devil going on. Many injured people are in the treatment rooms and members of the 4th Division criss-cross to to treat the injured.
Would be interesting to know where are all the injured. Kendo practice session of the Eleventh unit? Laboratory accident in the Twelfth? Salmonella poisoning in the cafeteria?
Here is a wonderfully redundant part: You see Kotetsu Isane, although they do not. In the next sentence she noticed it but still. Hurrah! In any case of Rukia Unohana Isane and supplies.

Unohanna insured Ichigo and Renji, Rukia that nothing else is missing. Your body only has a great adrenalin rush all his Energy resources consumed. You just have to rest a bit then she would be better.
* headdesk *
has Wherever Unohana studied medicine, hopefully, comes not forth my doctor! In addition, this Statement Shinigami's just totally crazy, because they ultimately have no body, could produce the adrenaline ...
When asked what the reason for this (release was llig) stupid reaction from Rukia's body, Ichigo responds with this pearl of the elliptical style (note the missing verbs):

"Well that's hard to explain. We've got better I said too late and we had to run to school. We were already. We only had to cross an intersection. Rukia was in the middle as a vice on them. Rukia stood rooted to the spot. I've done it in the last minute it from the path of the truck to get. The idiot is not even moved aside. "
* headdesk * However,
Rukia is released after two days of the Fourth Division (because a lack of adrenaline Unohana is of course much more difficult to cure, as completely into its component parts, dismantled or Shinigami Arrancar). Ichigo wants to be forgiven as soon as possible from the Soul Society (which is why he there still rumgelungert know any) go to Kenpachi and Byakuya out of the way (of course did not realize that his sister adrenaline deficiency suffers fatal), but Rukia dragged him out of flimsy grounds to the property of the Kuchiki clan. Byakuya want them stays here overnight, as Espadas be in the real world.

Rukia is the night awake in bed. Ichigo She is not out of my head. He has them from two days ago saved to be run over. But her mind she can not continue rising as Ichigo in her door and door frame appears. He comes slowly up to her and stops in front of her. Ichigo slowly bends down to her and puts his lips on hers. Her eyes widened, but they soon closed them again and enjoy the kiss. But as soon as Ichigo is as fast as he is also gone. Before he leaves, however, through the door, he turns his head to her and said three words to her, she has never heard of him. "I love you."
Aww ... this scene Simply beautiful and romantic, which I will not spoil with my comments. And, do not. What the damn Ichigo drives still in the Soul Society? What is he doing in the House of Kuchikis? Why is this paragraph of something cheesy and clichéd?
Rukia jumps up and runs after Ichigo. She travels the door to her room and slams into him. There he remained to see at her door.

Haha, Rukia can travel on doors! Whether it works as with flying carpets?
also still a compliment to the successful sentence construction.
The following is a well corny love letter from Rukia, then kissed with fire, passion and desire, and then ... then the Canon abused:

Rukia gets out of her bedside table a CD player and small speakers. Presses play.

Yes, of course, CD-player in the Soul Society. Especially in the Kuchiki estate. * Headdesk *
Following is a wonderfully kitschy lyrics, then wrrrrrrrrrrroom, a time-warp again

That night changed in their lives from scratch. Especially after three months. Rukia is back in the fourth Division brought. This time of Byakuya and Ichigo. She visits her brother as she collapses. Unohanna-Taichou investigated and it has good news for Rukia and Byakuya and bad for Ichigo.

Naaa, what will it be? I offer the distinguished audience the opportunity to open Quicktime!

Is Rukia

a) really a man?
b) suffering from incurable adrenaline income?
c) suffering from incurable OOCness?
or d) ...

Rukia is pregnant.

Woow, who would have thought? (That makes no sense technically, the canon was sometimes to be seen.)
The sealed Ichigo death. The next day he wakes up in the 4th Division, and can only remember a pitch acidic Byakuya.

Note: If you're dead, you get into the Fourth Division. Fourth Division = Nirvana?
Rukia wakes up anyway at his bedside and pressed him a picture of the child in his hand.

sets slowly in his head together a picture. Rukia Byakuya child. "WHAT !!!!! But-But-But can only "sex is: we have but-Oh God he is so angry" Even by

So, Ichigo, now time for those who had no sex education at school. woman are already pregnant! Well, again what learned!
And now get ready for another leap in time, whuui ~!

Six years have passed since then. Rukia has brought a healthy baby girl to the world.
, because thank God, is more deadly adrenaline income in childhood.

early In the morning the two are aroused. You need to a meeting in the Soul Society. But there is a problem. Their daughter.
Yay, it must be a great family so, in which the daughter is also affectionately called "the problem" mentioned.
Rukia wanted to keep honor in her sister and her daughter was named after her. Hisana. The small Hisana has the hair color of her mother. The eyes, however, the aunt of the great Hisana, purple. Hisana has inherited not only the body of her father but also his thick skull.
Rukia's eyes are not even purple? However, the girl I'm really sorry if you have the physique of a man as a woman that is certainly not so nice. In any case, is "the problem" unbelievable on its loving uncle, and therefore skin off his babysitters Ishida and Inoue to come into the Soul Society (as this is also hires a damn likely she'll beam , or so).

The meeting lasts for three solid hour. There you go again to the same subject Aizen. Ichigo would prefer now somewhere on the beach. Others drink rum sake or just quiet in one place.

This is called discipline. It is so important in the meeting only to see the destruction of the world, so nothing. Aizen if not managed in six years the world has to take over, is finally assumed that he never purchased.

The meeting is interrupted as per the 1st of a Shinigami Division comes in and holds something under his arm. Small Hisana.

something = the problem = the small Hisana

The freed himself and ran purposefully sent to their uncle. Not even their parents with a look appreciatively.

This would I do not, if my parents would consider me only as an irritating problem ...

follows Finally, a paragraph in which Byakuya is heavy emotions reported, because only with the small and Hisana problem-Hisana could and can he share his true feelings (for me it all sounds very serious, namely, so as Byakuya could not keep his wife and his niece apart. Eew.) and the rest of the world must be ice cold ...

And that's it again with our highly informative educational hour. When you connect to high adrenaline levels Suffer you to avoid extreme sports and consult their doctor or pharmacist. Also you may already be pregnant by sex: And do not forget!